|Reviews for Lost in Between|
| Poppyseed43 chapter 22 . 11/18/2013
Hello, I just finished reading this story , which turned out to be a good romantic story and a good read. I don't know if you still keep up with e-mails from this story as it has been posted for a few years now. I went on your site to read the sequel, Into the Space, but didn't find it, thus being disappointed. Regardless thank you for giving me at least this one good read. Poppyseed
| irishnlove2shop chapter 24 . 10/14/2013
Loved it, as well as all the character dynamics! Looking forward to the sequel!
| jmrbear chapter 20 . 11/11/2011
All I can say about their conversation is that Edward is a saint or, sadly, a doormat for her to walk over. I think it's sad that he is so incredibly insecure that he just rolls over and accepts whatever she gives him.
It seems more than a little unrealistic to me that they actually managed to turn back the clock on their sexual relationship that successfully. For two hormonal teenagers in a committed relationship it's incredibly unlikely for them to step back like that for long.
| jmrbear chapter 19 . 11/11/2011
First I want to say that I recently discovered your work and have previously read and really enjoyed "The Immersion of Edward Cullen". Obviously I've been enjoying this story too or I wouldn't have made it to Chapter 19. Over all I think that you have inserted them in a fresh and original tale and a set of circumstances that would naturally draw them to each other.
And here comes the but... While I think that you handled their first attempt at sex in a reasonably realistic manner, i.e. his reaction, her reaction, I absolutely do not think any normal 18 year old girl would have blown off as explicitly as she did in front of the boys parents. I think her behaviour was absolutely horrid and far worse than anything he said to her. She absolutely shamed and embarrassed him in front of his entire family, sharing intimate details, which should have stayed between the two of them, with his parents. All I could think as I was reading it was 'what a self-centered and insensitive bitch'.
It was his first time, not hers, and I can't understand how she could claim she loves him and then after one thoughtless slip of the tongue while he's feeling incredibly vulnerable and emasculated, she decides that it's the perfect time to emasculate him further? I will never understand how it is that we, as women, continue to believe that the only emotions that matter are our own. Having raised both a teenage daughter and son, it's been my experience that teenage boys are often more sensitive and take things considerably harder than the girls. Girls have a constant outlet in talking to other women and an ability to rebound from setbacks in a truly impressive fashion, while boys tend to internalize in the most painful of ways. It seems to be a constant theme that the boys should be grovelling to the girls, while the girls take little to no responsibility for their own behaviour. I can't help but be disappointed to run across this theme again.
| dnabgeek chapter 24 . 10/28/2010
Great stuff :) I've been so nusy writing lately I've had no time to read... I'll go check out the sequel in a bit :)
| BRANDY0925 chapter 22 . 10/15/2010
loved this story!
| BRANDY0925 chapter 8 . 10/14/2010
i love the relationship Bella and Edward have with each others parents. That's how i was with my hs boyfriend's mom. She was very very important to me. We'd dated for a yr and a half, and even though we were broken up, she came to my graduation party, and we had dinner ever few weeks for a long time. A couple years later, i got married, and she met my husband, and he loved her too. Some people think it's wierd that we kept up a friendship, but i think it would've been wierd not to. Why cut someone you love out of your life for no real reason. She passed away suddenly about 5 years ago, and i was devastated. Your Esme brings up good memories of her for me, thanks!
| IcyFirey07 chapter 24 . 10/11/2010
Awesome outtake! Besides the actual ending, I think you ended this story very nicely. :)
| Dolphin4442 chapter 24 . 10/11/2010
Great outtake :)
| Sunfeathers chapter 24 . 10/11/2010
Awesome update, Gin! Very sexy and sweet. :) I thought the part when Bella fell in the woods was riveting ... I kept expecting something to happen with Jake. He was acting kind of weird, wasn't he? (I almost felt like this was a foreshadowing or something - will he show up in ItS?)
I can't believe this is the last chapter of LiB! I just loved this Edward and Bella - and I'm so glad you'll be continuing their story in the sequel.
Thanks for writing, bb! :)
| jansails chapter 24 . 10/11/2010
Shoot! It can't be over yet.
Damn they're good together.
| revans12 chapter 24 . 10/10/2010
They are too cute. I have to give it to Bella, she can run farther than I even could. I loved, LOVED LiB. And I'm so glad there's a sequel :)
| Dolphin4442 chapter 23 . 10/8/2010
Great outtake :)
| IcyFirey07 chapter 23 . 10/7/2010
Great outtake! I really had a good time reading it. I'm glad you decided to share it with us because it's a good semi-alternative ending. js, it would have been awesome kick Brandon's ass hahah..
| revans12 chapter 23 . 10/7/2010
That was a cute outtake. I feel for Bella and running. I hate it, we have never gotten along haha. Can't wait for the 2nd one!