|Reviews for Survival|
| sam chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
make another chapter! i LOVED it!
| Hawki chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
-Would be good to have something to seperate the text of the author's note from the story proper. Italics, a linebreaker, etc.
-Hard to comment much in-depth on this, given how short it is. Think more than a few mintues passed in in-universe time between Trudy being shot down and the Dragon being downed as well, but that's irrelevant. Obviously a prologue, but I think more could have been added to it.
| Alice.Burns chapter 3 . 8/17/2010
Cute story! You've put a lot of your own creative twists to this story. My favorite? Trudy gets her own avatar. Please keep going, I'd like to see how that turns out.
| DementedDebi chapter 3 . 5/19/2010
It's very interesting and Trudy and Norm are a cute couple :D
Say, have they always liked each other in that way? If not, you could always explore that in another chapter.
Can't wait for chapter 4 :D
| Bigoldfrog chapter 3 . 5/18/2010
Enthralling plot; looking forward to seeing where this goes.
| Casperace13 chapter 3 . 5/18/2010
Great plots, but you really need to work on your dialog. The whole thing feels rushed.
| DementedDebi chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
This is an interesting start!
I always liked Trudy, glad you found quite a clever way for her to survive. The only problem I'd have is the layout of your story, at times it got a bit confusing to read. Apart from that this is a great start to a story.
Subscribed, I can't wait for part 2 :)