Reviews for The Dark Becomes You
tcd2017 chapter 3 . 4/22/2014
I am in loooooove with this story soooooo please finish it I hop shika will be ok and I have a filling on who will help them get out of there itochi will I now it because he is the third person right I have to now what happens next sooooooo pleeeeeeeaaaaaassssss finish the story I'm a biiiiiiiiiig faaan oookkkk I no this is really troublesome right now is I will goo I love u I am no stalker ... maybe :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
shika lover chapter 3 . 5/5/2013
why don't you continue ?
Orochi is a good guy here haha i like it
Night Yagami chapter 3 . 6/15/2012
i'm really curious to find out who the client is! who wants my oro-chan as a pet? *3*

this is very interesting and i can't wait for more! i've never played any FF games so i feel a little in the dark, haha, but i like that this weiss guy gets along with orochimaru as a scientist.
Rosebunse chapter 3 . 5/12/2012
Really, really interesting! I don't mind the other characters, if only because you seem to be using them more for who they are than anything. Better than screwing up OCs.
Spooky chapter 2 . 3/28/2012
Please write more, i'm dying to know what happens next. 3
Happy Reader chapter 2 . 3/20/2012
Oh man! I am loving this (well, except that part where they were testing out Shikamaru's goods..had to skip that haha), you have to update soon!

I really love your concept and that you have taken a diff direction with Orochimaru than most fic's on here. I cant wait to get more details about whats going on!
littleblueclovers chapter 2 . 3/20/2012
"-but there were things that grown men were not supposed to do with adolescent boys-"

Me: *spits out drink* whoa. OROCHIMARU just said that... wow. XD



who's the client?

what was the mark?

who else is caught?

what happened to itachi? (if it is)

What is wiess planning?

FreyrFnk chapter 2 . 3/13/2012
I'm so glad you decided to continue this hehe I dunno what anime you're crossing over with but it's all done very well 8D

It's so nice to see Orochi as something other than a twisted villain and/or pedophile o

Goodluck on getting the next update done 8D -excited-
Rosebunse chapter 2 . 3/13/2012
I had my doubts, but it's a very interesting read :)
Jake chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
So you're not continuing this?
Random Reader chapter 2 . 8/18/2011
I really am intrigued with this story and is praying you update this soon

P.S. A little criticiam (Not to positive that is spelled correctly)

Orochimaru seems to be a little OOC but the story is still a good read
8D SHIKA-SMEXY chapter 2 . 3/25/2011
YAAAAAAY my kinda story man, you gotta make another chappie, its to good to let die
Taichi09 chapter 2 . 10/22/2010
Excellent! I've been waiting for more from this story as well as "The Long Road Home" and I am waiting to see where this goes. Orochimaru seems a bit OOC though. He is normally so polite that I can't picture him speaking like this. Still, an interesting story line.

Please continue this!

ShilvaA chapter 2 . 10/22/2010
Wow great start to what im sure will be an awesome story. I really enjoy reading about these two, especially together.
Hope you update this soon. Its really good and you've got me hooked.
X shilvaA X
saiyanprincekills chapter 2 . 10/21/2010
Yay im so happy you updated this, its just got so much better. I couldn't believe when i heard the other prisoner was Orochimaru, i really thought he would be the client, he actually seems really kind, i like him.

Ooh Asuma's teaming up with Kabuto, this should be fun, i really can't wait for the next chapter, thanks this one was great. Xx
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