Reviews for Primary Care
Reli chapter 1 . 2/11/2014
Oh my gosh this is freakin precious. Honestly they're so in-character I can't believe it's not cannon. Your Shaun is perfect. I think I caught one mixed tense in there ("Shaun is…") but I don't really remember where and I'm only pointing it out because you asked in your AN. But my gosh your writing, development, time skips- everything, even the smallest details just make your fic absolutely magnificent.
Dajypop chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
This. This made my day. xD I'm still trying to get a good grasp on playing Shaun (though I totally am digging on the thoughts of him fumbling through memories Desmond isn't allowed to see (thanks to Lucy), and Des catching him touching himself during Ezio and Leo's private time. xD; Makes too much happy for me, because it's kind of like, "Oh, no, mom, it's not porn!" but it's worse, because it's, "No, Desmond, you dolt, I am NOT wanking off to your pitiful ancestry." While he's secretly like, "DESMOND Y U NO BE SUAVE LIKE EZIO OR UNDENIABLY SEXY LIKE ALTAIR? U JUST STOOPIT YANKEE." ...wow, I feel the need to cry after that. xD )
AmericanAssassin chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
Oh God...I can't even...holy crap...I just ruined a pair of underwear.
SulWulf chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
sweet XD love the story and the length (HA puns ;))
Mitzeee chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
Incredible. Thank you so much!
Stormy-chan59 chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
jeSUS FUCK THAT WAS SO HOT
LIKE I DON'T EVEN KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT AC BUT GODDAMN THIS KILLED ME
I'M SORRY THAT I'M SCREAMING BUT JFC I CAN'T NOT USE CAPSLOCK
THIS MIGHT BE ONE OF THE HOTTEST THINGS I EVER READ OKAY OKAY
I LOVE YOU FOR THIS IT MADE MY DAY I'M JUST TOTALLY I CAN'T FIND WORDS FOR THIS
IT WAS AMAZING SIMPLY AMAZING AND AS I SAID I KNOW ZERO ABOUT THE FRANCHISE BUT
THE CHARACTERS I LOVE THEM AND ALSO THE INTERACTION OKAY THAT WAS ALL
I'M OUT
Ookamikuro chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Once again, love. I laughed at Desmond's idea of "Seducing" and "aww"ed at Shaun's thoughts when Des blew up at him. My only criticism is that every once in a while you put Shaun where you should have put him or his. I know it's kinda hard working in third person focused, but reading it back to yourself out loud is the trick I've always used to make sure I have things right. Not that I can write let alone complete amazing stories like yours.
AwkwardNerd001 chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
... I LOVE IT! SO AWESOME!

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izayaspenis chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
unf unf unf.

Haha ok, on a serious note it was bloody good. You should be proud. I love stories from Shauns point of view and I believe that you pulled it off greatly. The sex at the end was nice too. But even without it, I would still love this fic. I can't quite place what it is... But I just really love this fic and if I could kiss you, I would.
Prismacoloured chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
3 loved it, incredible writing
Americana Psychotica chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
I can absolutely imagine that deleted scene in-game. XD Shaun is just so hilarious...poor in denial Brit. I'm currently resisting the urge to make a Nile joke, complete with a comment about British backed rule in Africa. XD This is complete win.
TheRealMapleSyrup chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
this was so good I couldn't stop reading, even though I was supposed to be asleep an hour ago.

Completely and absolutely loved it
Droce chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
This fanfiction.

I love the way it flows, how it doesn't feel too rushed- It's just amazing.

You do this pairing justice. 3
ehan650 chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
since it sounds like you wanted this...

unf unf unf

no, but seriously, this is great. it could practically see them, it was that well written :D
wellll chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
Good story, but 'fuck you' is an insult that was around before america was... :)
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