|Reviews for Betrayed: This Story Took 3rd in an NNT Contest!|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
Is there a second chapter coming up?
| Kachine Tala chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
this is amazing! will you write more?
| Shadows of a Dream chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
Yeah, I'm reviewing my own story - but this actually a comment directed towards the readers. The things that weren't completely in canon (according to the Eclipse novel) were:
1. I think that Leah knew that Sam had run away(which is why she was looking for him)
2. Old Quil went to visit Mrs. Uley and discovered Sam's wolf-ness after shaking his hand... but my version is still technically in canon because maybe Jacob didn't tell the story right or altered it for some reason.
All minor canon details, but I thought that I should mention them.
| o0FLAM3S0o chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
Great one shot