Reviews for Consciousness
Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2012

Simply beautiful.

I was really disappointed when in the show all he said about it was "It feels so warm."
I was thinking, "THAT'S IT?! What about all the senses he gets back?! What about his first MEAL in what FIVE YEARS?!"

But you make it better.
Well, at least I'm not as frustrated anymore. AS
Aurora-Borealis Coyote chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
This is really wonderful, and there are some really powerful lines that are very meaningful from Al's point of view-"(he has eyelids, and they work, they work) " I loved that one. It felt like it was Al's thoughts, it is a very nice look into Al's mind.
Qwi-Xux chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
*happy sigh* I loved this, too. The thought of Alphonse using all of his senses again after so long is such a wonderful thing to contemplate, and you did this with such good humor and warmth.
oakleaf chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
Wow. That's one powerful story.

It may have an unique style but it's still really good.

Love tis angle of an Al with his body back.

Thank you for a great story.
Pumpkin2Face chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
So absolutely fantastic! I loved this! If only I could be half as amazing as you when I write my review .
U.Ta.Ne chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
Oh that was beautiful *A* Smooooth. Heartwarming ;A; OH AL! *hugs* Haha! Love this! :)
Orange Singer chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
Katsumara chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
Haha. I wondered how Al would feel when he comes back to the plane of the living (WHICH HE WILL! )