Reviews for Taking a Break
Trainer Theta chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
This is the first Girl x Girl I've read on the site, and i gotta say, it was pretty impressive. check your spelling as some words weren't spelt correctly and use a bit more time going into depth about things, particularly the characters and the setting. There wasn't enough description. Be careful not to write too much descriptive writing, because that can make a story boring. Great story though.
Honest Abe chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
Humph. That was mostly about Ash/Dawn. The one for May/Dawn is just PHYSICAL romance,not mental. They did it just for a "confidence boost" and something May could tell Brendan. I mean,come on,honestly.
snowman794 chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
interesting story, a cute one shot which you could expand into a two or three shot
Warrior Cat Cody chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
That was a great story between Dawn and May. It was sexy and great.

And whoever Johnnyd2 is, I hope that was a good gift for him.

Keep up the good work!

~AvatarCat09
Guest chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
This is a really nice story you made!

You know, I really like it when Dawn and May kiss each other, but when they're naked together (even for a rated T story!), it turns very spicy!

I have to say this to Johnnyd2 or whoever his name is: "That was a really good present you got there! Sorry about not knowing your birthday, but happy birthday anyways!" :)

You yourself keep up the great work!

From, AvatarCat09