|Reviews for I Almost Lost It|
| Dragowolf chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
Great family moment! And cool battle scenes! Great work!
| RedLovesSnakes chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
Well I think it was pretty good!
Note: Dont let any flame stop you from writing... believe me. If we all did then there would be no writers on FF. You have alot of potential and I like the idea behind your piece. I cant wait to read more from you.
| birthright-of-insanity chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
Hun, all you really did was change was Kamakura's race from Japanese to American-that's not exactly revising. The writing has potential. My advice is get some kind of spell-check system. Also, really study the characters- you seemed to switch Jynx's personality with Kamakura. After all-Jynx is the senior appretice- Kamakura is the newbie. Don't take this as a flame, because it's not. It's constructive criticism. Keep working on it! :]