|Reviews for My Beloved Monster & Me|
| Fredrick Bismarck chapter 12 . 1/25
I'm glad the school attendance thing was addressed and the story's about to pick up. Excited to hear the backstory. I hope you continue with this.
| Fredrick Bismarck chapter 11 . 1/25
I wish there was some uninterupted sexy time. Oh well. Anyway, you've really changed the small town setting. Lazar tag, theater, nightclub in forks... It was fun but it is all a bit much. And the lie told to charlie... He didn't file a report for an assault or conducted any investigation. Seems sort of unbelievable. He just left them alone after the freak out. Also, I lost track, but is it a school night? On a different note... 'It's not like she knew the difference between social norm and stereotypical, over-franchised, teenage romance vampire antics'. Was that self-referencing? Sort of meta? Still wonderful but some holes are opening up that need fixing.
| Fredrick Bismarck chapter 10 . 1/25
Wow that was hilarious. Jealous bella and all. Bella is a lot different than canon. They both can be childish at times. I just wish alice gave a little confirmation to bella and the boy that she was Bella's.
| Fredrick Bismarck chapter 9 . 1/25
Okay, now let me go over my take on what was revealed or hinted about in this chapter. The whole thing got pretty heavy but quite interesting. Let's start with alice. It seems she was rescued from the asylum/institution or resulting nomadic life by Carlisle, but I don't know when or for how long she traveled as she told bella earlier. She also avoided human society and continued to even when she was with the Cullens, unlike canon where she revels in human culture. She just allows it to pass her by not allowing an outside tether to her life - I'll get to more on that in a bit. There are holes in her understanding of human society. It still appears she is aware of her past or at least now she was changed but maybe not her life as a human? Also, it appears she wasn't responsible for Jasper joining the family. She still values human life, but she is almost completely against placing her view on others. Protesting everyone's right to their beliefs even if it's immoral to her own. It's where she disagreed with the Cullens. Them judging others and placing their beliefs on others. Alice's philosophy so far seem a little like anarchy or libertarianism. No governance or societal standard of morals/ethics and rule of law. The individual's only responsibility is one's self and what he/she cares about. Keeping and defending it themselves. 'Vampires can be human drinkers if they want. I don't judge them, as long as they don't touch my human.' It's interesting because alice is arguing for what vampires represent. Vampires are the ultimate state of freedom and individalism. Style and drama. They have the strength to be self-sufficient and naturally give into their baser instincts. Completely unbound. Romanticism. On a related note, if she was taught how to hunt animals, why does she go for the domesticated ones close to humans at the start of this story? Next, it seem the Cullens may be more involved in the larger vampire world. Maybe some sort of crusade to make all vampires vegetarian? They did or are going to do something to the Volturi and were intent on using alice as a weapon. Sorry for the long review, and maybe I'm just seeing things and making to much of things, but to me, it's quite facinating. But, I do just like pure fluff. That's the one of the main reasons why I'm reading. Great work.
| Fredrick Bismarck chapter 8 . 1/25
Now I'm really interested in what happened between alice and the Cullens. So she does have a past with them? I don't know the lie to charlie will hold up. Alice was seen at school and Bella's truck was in the driveway when he got home.
| Fredrick Bismarck chapter 7 . 1/25
Yes, she has a completely sweet disposition. The interaction with the various characters at the school was great. I like the little spat they had. It one way to show bella that she has to be aware of Alice's more animalistic nature and her position as Alice's mate.
| Fredrick Bismarck chapter 6 . 1/25
So you've separated the heart and soul as two different bonds of affection. Also, making the heart something more special. Sort of different... Anyway, that was still cute as hell. I don't think I can stop saying that about this story. It this sort banter and interaction that I wish all bellice stories should have.
| Fredrick Bismarck chapter 5 . 1/25
They kissed! Their interactions are just precious. Two peas in a pod. Like two bickering children. Both can moments of good natured childishness. I just want to squeal, but that would be embarrassing. Bella has a more impulsive and lighter personality and a spunky internal thought process. The Cullens seem more wary and less compassionate from first impressions. I just like your unique take on everything. Alice's introduction to Bella's life and her backstory. You certainly have a way with banter and cute situations.
| Fredrick Bismarck chapter 4 . 1/25
Oh man, this is cute. It like alice is more aware of the events leading up to her change, but less refined because of her avoidance of humans and never meeting the Cullens. But she's still as adorable as ever. And Jasper still found the Cullens without alice. I agree with the cat inspiration and influence on your alice. Her craving Bella's attention. It makes her more animalistic at time and all the more exciting. I still wonder about the Cullens at school. They know she's in the area?
| Fredrick Bismarck chapter 2 . 1/25
This is really cute. She's like a feral but lucid puppy girl. It somewhat reminds me of that book 'let the right one in' but less dark and violent or disterbing... well then again, not many similarities but still reminds me anyway. I wonder how alice ended up in her poison with the Cullens present at school and all. Different backstory. Still seems fun.
| Fredrick Bismarck chapter 1 . 1/25
This is quite interesting. Still need to see how you develop the characters differently and the deviations from the plot, but so far, this was funny.
| milagglad chapter 12 . 10/21/2014
Esperando el proximo, actualiza porfa
| SelinaShadow chapter 12 . 10/21/2014
Ahhhhh more? Pweeese? Love your work
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/21/2014
For once let her heart win over he head?
What the fuck, shouldn't it I DON'T KNOW be the other fucking way around, this is the most impulsive Bella I have read in 20 fics!
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/21/2014
Awkward, though I am positive according to cannon newborns cannot resist blood in the first hundred years of their life if there is no guidance...
The monster overwhelms the 'human' - -She would have lost her pacifism...and hippiness...