|Reviews for Black Light|
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
That was wonderfully written, keep it up! :D
| BladedInk chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
/cries/ so, b-beautiful, yet so sad... /siffles/
| twilighter2o chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
just the right choice of words..
it was grievefully joyful.
| romeosjuliet14 chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
that was sad I did not see that coming from how the beginning sounded and felt to me.
| BeauteousCake chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
So beautiful! It's a shame no one has reviewed this yet... it was really a nice piece. You captured everything perfectly- the emotions, the hot grindy sex, everything that happens when the worst occurs.
Also really liked how pleased and heartbroken Edward was with her death. I suppose that's right, because Bella would no longer be with him, but she also wouldn't be a "monster" like him.
One line particularly inspired me, and could lead to a seriously fucked-up smutty fic, if anyone ever wanted to write it. "She never noticed the pain, the fire boiling in her veins. She was too caught up in a wonderful expanse to even feel the whisper of death, its cold vice." Imagine, if Edward fucked Bella throughout her entire transformation so she's in a constant state of pleasure. That's one way of beating the pain of becoming a vampire! (Screw Carlisle and his morphine theory!)
Overall, great, great work.