Reviews for In Transition
Gillian Deverone chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
WONDERFUL! I absolutely love the stream-of-consciousness thing, but more so, I love what you said. I'm a little sad they didn't do it in the ocean, but you can't win them all. My fave part? "So…ummm…wannamoveinwithme?" GREAT!
flower pot girl chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
Wonderful and poignant and I didn't realise it was possible to say so much in so few words.
MyAlias chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
I've never read a story quite like this before, and I loved it. It really does work as a story, even with the unique structure. I've always wished we could have seen some of that vacation, and this was very sweet. Nice job!
Claire chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
Hi, I loved some of these - would you mind if I used some of them to turn into a full-fledged story? (totally understand if you'd prefer not!) My work's at . if you want to check it out... Thanks!
LarSinger chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
This was so adorable! I loved the story you told with these prompts and characters! Just wonderful!
lcf328 chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
Love it! Very sweet. :)
Tractor Girl chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
That was so lovely. I loved it.
sassie69 chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
This was very well written and gave interesting snapshots. Thanks