Reviews for Beloved Helpless
To lazy to login chapter 3 . 5/20/2010
I love it so much Keep it going please, or I'll cry T.T
ElricKeyblade chapter 3 . 5/20/2010
DUDE, my jaw almost dropped open reading this. I was getting chills just reading the part about Operation Pawn- all I could think was, "Oh, NO." This is getting REALLY good- update as soon as you can, please! bd
gardenofstardust chapter 2 . 5/18/2010
HA. I KNEW IT. It's THAT device, the one that what's-her-face made . . . will she be making an appearance as well? Would be interesting if she did.

It's great so far. Keep at it!
ElricKeyblade chapter 2 . 5/18/2010
O.O WOW, an update the very next day? AWESOME!

I loved this chapter just as much as the one before it. You really helped bring to light a lot of Soul's insecurities, as well as some of his motivations for the way he acts towards Maka in response to her actions towards him as detailed in the previous chapter. But whoa, what's this about Operation Pawn? Doesn't sound too good, especially if STEIN is in on it...

Oh, I didn't mention this before, but...GREAT writing skills here. Absolutely fabulous. Can't wait for the next update! bd

P.S.: Thanks for reviewing my fic too. It was sweet. 3
The Inimitable DA chapter 2 . 5/18/2010
Gah. Please, please, *please* don't tell me Stein has some involvement in what happened to Soul. And you've got me again with the cliffhanger, so obviously I'm going to have to keep checking back to see what happens next.

DA
Hitoshi-chan chapter 2 . 5/18/2010
It's easy to see that this is going to be an amazing story. To be honest I've always been curious about exploring the darker realities of the Soul Eater canon, especially the relationship between normal humans and Shibusen students. You've captured the insecurities and social issues perfectly, and I can't wait to learn more about how you've constructed their world. Your characterization is engaging, and expertly reflects this particular interpretation of the Soul eater world. The way Soul and Maka interact, and their perceptions of each other, and each others actions is frustratingly accurate and inaccurate, and I can see the potential for a lot of conflict between them due to their lack of communication, especially Maka's refusal to show her more light hearted side, or at least as it seems to me. XD

Anyway, sounds like a great story. I'm looking forward to more!

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Okay and...I read those entire two chapters and wrote this review without actually processing the author name until now.

So, Sani here~ Loved the story, can't wait to see more from you!
MarshmellowDragon chapter 2 . 5/18/2010
Oh wow. As if standard teen angst wasn't enough, Soul gets the existential kind too. Poor kid.

I've fallen in love with your characterizations of Soul and Maka, just so you know. And the world-building you've done in just two chapters. From the pizzeria to the weapon ring, the additions feel natural, not forced or tacked on just for added tension.

Do I make any sense? Probably not. I'm rambling. In any case, thank you very much for writing this, and I hope you continue.
ElricKeyblade chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
Whew, I already LOVE where this story's going! Darker introspective on the technicalities of Shibusen's line of work, SoMa hints and interaction (especially on Soul's side, since it's never very easy to know what he's thinking), long chapter...I simply can't wait for the next one! Great job so far! bd
ToastWeaselofDOOM chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
Hmmm, this is really good. I hope you write more~

I was guided here by your post on the LJ Shibusen community, and I don't believe there is a way to indent on . Unless you want to become best friends with your spacebar.;
Chiiiiiiiiiiii chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
I love this already. Seriously. Writing style and the fact that I'm actually THINKING about what may have happened.

Can't wait for the next chapter~~!

~Pachi
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