Reviews for Fire Team
Phoenix Rise from the Ashes chapter 4 . 8/22/2013
I love it :D keep writing, sorry for the bad review, but I reAlly like this story
Crazy4Reading chapter 4 . 5/29/2011
That was great! I can't wait to read more, please update soon!
kfe chapter 4 . 1/11/2011
so i think that it is pretty good. I only saw a few typos. but yeah i like it.
Merrri chapter 4 . 11/10/2010
Oh pleeeeaaaaaasssseeeee update soon!

I like it, A LOT. Janco is so cheeky though! I think you've captured him well. I didn't know Ari had such a temper...

Thanks, and keep it up!

Merrri :)
obliviuns chapter 4 . 8/10/2010
loving it, i abselutely adore ari and janco, they are so amusing : )

awesome story, i like your style of writing its really good.

its nice to see people doing the power twins justice, keep writing
obliviuns chapter 2 . 8/9/2010
wow this is a reaaly good story.

great Idea, im loving it.

please keep writing
Kaarl chapter 4 . 7/19/2010
i liked the chapter (:

i think its cool how youre not making them best friends form the start, it makes the story more interesting

update soon (:
Fenrir Draca chapter 4 . 6/26/2010
Haha, Poor Janco.

That is so mean of Ari, but funny, kinda like what I would do.

Keep it up and update soon.
Gabbiehannah chapter 4 . 6/20/2010
this was a really good chapter i cant wait for the next one :)
lil-fangirl chapter 3 . 6/19/2010
I really love this story! I've only just finished the trilogy and i love these two! so glad people are writing about them!
Kaarl chapter 3 . 6/17/2010
you updated!

grea chapter, i think its cool that ur gonna switch POV's in the next one
Harlequin99 chapter 3 . 6/17/2010
You're very welcome! I really enjoy being the beta for this story, another great chapter (:
Gabbiehannah chapter 2 . 6/17/2010
You have to update soon :)
Copper Kestrel chapter 2 . 6/13/2010
Ooh, this looks to be shaping up to be a very good story! Ari and Janco have always been my favourite characters from the 'Study' Series, so I'm really looking forward to seeing what you do with them here! So far, I like your portrayal of Janco - his thoughts and little inner monologues seem very in character. Looking forward to what happens next!
choosing a pen name is hard chapter 2 . 6/7/2010
loving this story. Really like the use of features to identify people. Looking forward to ari making an apperance! Please update soon!
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