|Reviews for Broken Pieces|
| anlmoon chapter 1 . 7/16
| cara9001 chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
| aj chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
i dont get it
| TheRomanticNerd chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
Heart-wrenching! I was afraid it would be Trunk who was dying - losing parents hurt like no other, but losing a child is just unbearable...
Thumbs up for angst and somehow comforting Vegeta!
| Dragoncat chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
Offering words of comfort...as only Vegeta can.
Short, but sweet. Keep on writing!
| Agato - The Hadou Inari chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
Okay there's the impression that someone died but one problem (Other than the shortness):
WHO THE F**K DIED?
| Sienna Maiu chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
A very simple, realistic sort of piece. (Certainly far too realistic to have any place in canon.)
One typo: Bulma says "supposed" in the past tense, rather than the present tense which is otherwise going on in the dialogue.
| FanficMogul chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
Okay Trunks died... Nice writing...
| Unlisshed chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
"Now stop being pitiful already." Had me laughing for ages, even though the topic of her father dying was pretty sad.
Good short fic.
| Blonde-Existentialist chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
Hum, I was kind of surprised by this, mainly cause of the topic and non-relation to recent writing. But still a well written bit. Sad for the obvious topic, but not overly so since its not overly descriptive or long.
| Aldamonburst chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
pretty good. sorry i'm not good at reviewing for unhappy stories. but it is good!
| Queen Elenya Hawk chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
I was confused at first because I wasn't sure who they were talking about. But the whole situation is really awful, Bulma not wanting to accept it by trying to fix him herself. Sad, really.
| the grey mage chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
yeah, dr. briefs was hella old even in dragon ball.
| Alake chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
Aw that was... not really sweet, you know. Or sorta, in a Vegeta-and-Bulma kind of way. I love how you say that his voice doesn't really soften, but *quietens*. And his clumsy way to comfort her (?)/make her see the truth.
Good job, as usual. Loved it 3