Reviews for Feelings and Other Usless things
keytomyheartmyimmortal chapter 4 . 2/22/2013
wow right to the point in your story. and an mpreg
Emerald-Pen chapter 4 . 9/13/2012
WOW...mind blown!
Of Kings and Queens chapter 3 . 8/24/2012
This story is ridiculous. It's quite awful. Sorry.
Niinxis chapter 2 . 4/27/2012
First of all, this is constructive criticism, not mindless flaming on my part. The story had nI real flow, it was just a complete jump from one idea to the other. The characters thoughts were... Bad per se, and how they reacted to one another was preposterous. Nothing of this story shows creative writing abilities and you butchered naruto's characters. And please, committing suicide because of a love rejection? Stupid. If you personally think this, talk to friends or something. But anyways, try harder and with some additions and some erasing of some parts, this can turn decent.
She.Drowned.In.Venom chapter 4 . 3/2/2012
Cute. Silly. Sweet. Not a bad little fic.
Kire chapter 4 . 2/14/2012
Nice story. Don't know why I'm into cutting yaoi fics but I am so... Write more? PLEASE!
rokudaime09 chapter 4 . 11/10/2010
it was cute! not too much drama!
1cibi gaara3 chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
hehehehe that was wierdd but goooooooooooooood
bubbleairhead chapter 4 . 8/31/2010
a MPREG ewww, u are suppose to warn about those you know. that ending was pathetic and your writting style is rushed, you really need to get a beta to check ur writting or a co writter to bulk out your ideas, because this was only funny because it was sooo badly done. and for saying that it was suppose to be quite serious that isnt good. u seriously need to get a beta before uploading anything else.
Moontoy chapter 4 . 8/29/2010
Da ta da! That was good! Emo power! *flys away* * lol
BookHippie chapter 4 . 8/29/2010
Ugh, Sakura is such a pain. Glad she got what she deserved
violetkisses chapter 4 . 8/29/2010
funny :) seriously, who would've thought? :))
Kureru Elric chapter 4 . 8/28/2010
The end was so funny! XD haha I loved it!
tasha chapter 4 . 8/28/2010
yeah it was kinda shallow. u should have been a bit more in depth with the story. decent enough tho.
Me chapter 4 . 8/28/2010
You are a disgrace to the SasuNaru fandom. Learn how to fuck*ng write before submitting anything, ok?
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