Reviews for She Loves Me, She Loves Me Not
piper chapter 35 . 8/8/2011
NOOOOOOOOOOOO! He has to stay in Beverly Hills! Great chapter!
brankel1 chapter 35 . 8/8/2011
Fantastic job.
Carol chapter 34 . 8/4/2011
More please!
brankel1 chapter 34 . 7/18/2011
Love Kelly missing Brandon.
golfnjen83 chapter 34 . 7/17/2011
Update soon! I can't wait to read more.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
I am not critiquing the plot, but this is almost unreadable. There are grammatical mistakes everywhere, various tenses are used interchangeably, and the dialogue does not flow. If you hope to get published, work hard to become a good writer. Good writing will properly get your ideas across so that they may be evaluated. Good luck.
Carol chapter 33 . 5/23/2011
Glad you put in another love scene.
CoolHandLuke chapter 33 . 5/20/2011
This was so touching.
brankel1 chapter 33 . 5/17/2011
I love it.
golfnjen83 chapter 33 . 5/16/2011
Good chapter!
CoolHandLuke chapter 32 . 5/15/2011
I agree this should be in the beginning. But not bad.
BevFan chapter 32 . 5/4/2011
Cool mini story.
Carol chapter 32 . 4/25/2011
I like it but I kinda would rather read this in the very beginning.
brankel1 chapter 32 . 4/24/2011
Excellent Easter.
golfnjen83 chapter 32 . 4/23/2011
Interesting...update soon.
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