Reviews for Prince Peter and the Seven Dwarves
Guest chapter 1 . 2/27/2016
Peter's parents actually split when he's eight, but this was so well-written I'll let it slide. What a great depiction of permanent psychological damage, and you wrote from a four year old's perspective quite believably. And I loved the bit about Peter helping the other kids on the football team up, and kissing one's knee.
bellsinthedistance chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
I really enjoyed this story. You did a nice job with it. I liked the concept, and think that you are definately a good writer. Also, I was really interested in your interpretation of Claire. Normally she is thought of as much more closed-minded and homophobic than you wrote her to be, but I like your version. It implies that the fear grew as Peter grew, which I think is really cool. Definately not OC. All in all, a nice little story. It really made me giggle, and feel sad at the same time.