Reviews for Janette's Return
LaCrwa chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
Show, don't tell. This might have been interesting but it was painful to read. It read like third grade copy. Does not qualify as fiction. You just described what you think happened without making the reader part of the story. You failed to show the story. You merely told us what happened. YAWN! You need to read a lot of good fiction so you can lern how to write.
Mary Rose chapter 1 . 6/9/2003
I liked this.
AmberEyes chapter 1 . 2/8/2003
Very Cool!
Mis Fortune chapter 1 . 4/10/2002
This was a decidedly positive take on what happened after Janette was brought across the 2nd time. I only hope that Vachon survived and Janette would forgive Nick that quickly. Personally, I think it would take her alot more alone time before she would return to her "family". Keep up the Forever knight fics though! I can never get enough of them.