Reviews for Harry Potter and the Brotherhood
kit.lloyd7 chapter 7 . 9/6
fuck shit bitch ass tits cunt pussy!
Illuviar chapter 1 . 7/12
Interesting start!
Dr8gn chapter 3 . 6/18
now that was a chapter whoo
Dr8gn chapter 2 . 6/18
good call there
GentlestCobra2 chapter 19 . 4/21
Great make more chapters
OriksGaming chapter 6 . 4/4
Your writing's decent, but Harry's way overpowered. Reading the mind of a Master Legilimens and Occlumens? There's a reason he's a master of the mind arts. Even if you're going with the non canonical idea that runes trump spells, it's still not plausible for Harry to be able to read Dumbledore's mind. In canon, runes class was just the study of ancient languages, not any kind of pseudo fuinjutsu.
Valeform chapter 8 . 3/31
If these Assassins prefer to have anonymity over their existence then why would they choose to go and take a job that clearly exposes their existence to school children and to even go as far as to take a PHOTO with a high ranking member which gives people proof of their existence.
Valeform chapter 2 . 3/30
Welp... I never would've guessed that there would be a house elf that would become an assassin... In retrospect, house elves are near-perfect candidates to be assassins seeing as they are almost never suspected to do anything to the 'superior' masters that they serve.
Diavo chapter 12 . 3/28
I would like to share a random sting of profsnity. Dementor spit, elf booger, troll sweat, unicorn guts, basilisk blood, dragon dung. You are welcome.
Tony McNucklz chapter 8 . 3/26
while he didn't reveal much, the idea that an Assassin would have a question and answer session and then taking a photo? no. just no. liking and still reading, but that was ridiculous. and the willing photo was compromising to the brotherhood in my opinion.
draco7347 chapter 19 . 3/13
really love this story cant wait for new chapters
Guest chapter 19 . 3/8
Want more
amerdism chapter 19 . 3/2
Awesome story, I hope to see more soon, when's the next chapter going up?
APSN chapter 14 . 2/14
Lost me on this chapter...
Few gaping and sorry to say this, pretty stupid plot holes are present in this chap...

Voldeshorts knows harry potter is alive, but doesn't know him to be Altair...or Ezio...

Why not do the logical thing...place harry potter in gof...would have much deep impact on Harry and the brotherhood.

Second n more important, Altair DO not exist in this time... It is just a name being used...

Not to mention, too many unused OCs.
Guest chapter 19 . 1/16
The kiss must be important, but how? My favorite part is when Ezio expects her to know why they left but she wasn't catching on until she put assassin meaning together. I can imagine the look on his face as the silence grew. Is this connected to what Anais wanted Master Reeves to look at? Also, is Ezio's uniform different from Altair's due to the lack of reactions from the students and headmistress?
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