Reviews for The Pain of Butterflies
DragonRose4 chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
Oh wait, now i remember that episode. I had forgotten about the hallucinations.

I like this one but I got a little confused with the flashback. Might have been just me. Thumbs up!
brodie-wan chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
Powerful writing, Shenandoah Risu. I was right back in the episode. I could see James sitting on her bed and a helpless overwhelmed Young doing the best he could.

You have a talent for touching emotion in your writing. It is very human. I'm thankful for that.
caia caecilia chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
Love it :)
Lillz chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
wow, excellent ficlet. very emotive, and very well done. his touch of confusion at the end is very well played, as is his helplessness, and his determination to shoulder a responsibility he doesn't want but knows he must.

any more coming?

x