Reviews for Romeo & Juliet: Alternate Ending
sam chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
can u make one up for me
philip chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
really enjoyed your ending
abram chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
LOVE it!

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The Relentless One chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
romeo lover chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
you did awesome and you included rosaline too i wonder if you could make another one with juliet finding out she is pregnat.
puertorra chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
Love the Shakesperian script. :) amazing writing
kahochan13 chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
i liked it. :)
Aureleis chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
I liked this. I enjoyed the idea that Juliet did go to a convent, and that she met Rosaline there. I also really liked your characterization of Rosaline, she's very much like I imagined her.

Excellent job overall.
Lucather chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
Stunning, purely stunning. To be completely honest, better then most of the Shakespere Ive read in my life. I knew you were good, but this is amazing. You really do have an outstanding talent, especially for someone who is practically self-taught. It was truthful, creative, beatiful, and passionate. Cant wait to read some more.
Just the Wind chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
I enjoyed it. The writing style was fabulously realistic. Something seemed a little false to me though that may just be my acquaintance with the true ending. All in all, very good :)
ladaane chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
Well done!

I think you stayed true to Juliet's character.

The only mistake I think you made was when Rosaline introduced herself to Juliet. Remember, Rosaline is Capulet's niece which means that she is Juliet's cousin, so they would already know each other.