|Reviews for Shifting Connections|
| Jigoku no Yami chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
this was good. I wonder, just how will the Hyuuga family deal with their heir crashing with the one who she loves. And well i can see things getting really out of hand. Fast.
| deitarionSSokolow chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
Looking good so far. I'm glad to see you decided to continue this timeline. I'm not over fond of making it a series of oneshots on a site like FFnet where there's no mechanism for tying together stories into a series, but it's not a huge deal.
| Shinjitsu chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
A job well done, this is exactly the way I imagine Hinata acting if something like you portray ever happened in cannon. It was an excelent story, the humor at the end was very appropiate. I would like to mention that your story made me curious about the byakugan ever obtaining a secondary form similar to what happens with the sharingan, and Im proud to say that Im working on my own version of it for a story Im writing, which I would be honored if you could beta read once I have my first chapter. Until the next chapter, looking foward to it.
| Insanity Lord chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
This feels like it should be part of a series, it really does. It's too good to remain just a one-shot!
- Insanity Lord.
| Deathmvp chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
Nice chapter. May I recomend that you says something in a follow up chapter that the reson they can not force her to get stay and get the seal is becouse leagaly she is a adult where normal it happens when at the age of 3 they are still kids.
| Aotrs Commander chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
Excellent work as usual. I look foward to seeing where this is going.
Keep up the good work.
(On an unrelated note, am I going mad or did there not used to section breaks in Hokage's Hat? 'Cos if there were, they aren't there now... Thought I might just mention it in passing.)
| Amber Pegasus chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
This is great! Two thumbs up!
| Hektols chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
Good for making a sequel for that magnificent story.
Poor Hanabi was owned by Hinata. What will the Hyuugas do now? Their heiress decided to defect the clan after proving her worth, it will give a lot to talk about.
Hinata should be assigned as one of Naruto's scorts.
| ken chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
Instead of stupid little one shot, post them as a short story or multichapter if you decide so. It will save everyone the time of looking for this you imbecile and maybe winning you some readers. Belive me, open this is annoying enough as it is, seeing the overused pairing, for once this seems like a readeble story, don't fuck it up
| lord Martiya chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
I think that Orochimaru is laughing himself silly in his seal at the though of the Hyuuga discarding the key to their true power. By the way, any chance he may have known the story of the two clans, deduced the key by logic (for some reason, the Tsuchikage and him strikes me as the most logical ninja after Shikamaru and Shino appeared to date) and wrote it somewhere that Anko may found?
| Hina the half heart chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
I'm dying to know what happens next! Sorry if I couldn't give you a better review.
| Psycho King chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
WHOOT! I just knew you had more for this plotline, I just new it! It's too good to even think of passing up!
And in true form, your latest piece brings another answer to the minor questions surrounding the pairing of Naru/Hina; namely 'What about the Hyuuga Clan?' I agree with the sentiment that the Hyuuga are not so much a family, but rather a conglomerant of people tied with genetics.
Other authors have tried to solve this problem thru various means (arranged marriages, coups, Kage-intervention, etc...) but most of those involve major OOCness from many angles and/or solutions that never address the core issues.
Your idea for Hinata to obtain the full mantle of heir and then shoving it back into their faces is briliant. While some may argue that Hinata's ooc, I say you took stock of her emotional development took account of all relevant situations and came to one of the most likely solutions possible.
On the other front, you tease us so... With your last story you hinted at Hinata gaining a new level of Byakugan without telling us jack-squat about it. In this one, you conferm it's existance, hint about it's possible abilities, and then leave it hanging like a perfect serloin right in front of our faces. You cruel, cruel author...
I anciously await the next piece of this story, Kishimoto only wishes he could do so well.
| LiMiTeDtheLimitless chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
please continue! cant wait ...
too much curiosity could be dagerous!
| Gabo 1602 chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
Cool, this is remarkably close to the manga, it's been a while since I've read something like this. I hope you can continue this!
| wisdom-jewel chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
This is a wonderful story. I can't wait till the next chapter for Naruto comes out