Reviews for The Lay of Sir William of Daira
Jadziwine chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
this was funny and charming and wonderful! I loved Sir William of Daira and his goofy face.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
I love your writing. Can you write one of George too please?
Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
That was excellent. Very original. Thank you.
finn1013 chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
Loved it. :)
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
That was a really awesome story! I really loved the ending. It makes me rather sad! *sniff*
Desiree1717 chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
What a great story! This was refreshing and warm hearted; I'm so glad I read it.
Fredricko chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
I love many things about this fic; I love the clarity, and the format that you used, and I especially love the focus of your story. William was so ridiculously adorable, and I'm glad he got a bit of a spotlight, thanks to you. D

Keep up the good work!

~Fred
3466-0402 chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
It's an interesting story :D
ForzaDelDestino chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
I absolutely LOVED this!

Great work!

Well written, clever, and there were some very good laughs. Please write another.
Tianne chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
I loved William in that episode- so I was thrilled to see someone writing a William-centric fic. Very original.

I really enjoyed this. I loved the characterisation of William. Just the perfect blend of confusion and understanding. Nice humourous touches, too.

I loved the backstory of how Arthur's actions in bringing the curse on the people by killing the unicorn in the past has affected them. Nice touch with Arthur's guilt and William being unaware of that.

Even as 'supporting role' characters in one way, Merlin, Arthur and co are beautifully in character.

The narrative flowed very nicely and you hit a very good blend of description and dialogue.

Thoroughly enjoyable.
PB Headless chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
xD This is lovely - i love Arthur's little spots of advice, specially

/ William added: "How does a knight talk to a lady in an absolutely strictly honourable fashion, without giving offense?"

"If you find out, let me know," Arthur muttered /

I will say this though... his spats of bisexuality were a bit confusing... It felt a bit OC and unnecessary, but i enjoyed the story either way.