Amazing story, thank you for sharing. I think my heart will always ache for Fatima and Abdul, oh man, that was a real guy punch.

Never saw the need to repeatedly go to high school, just to isolate yourselves and underachieve. its RETARDED. There has to be something else they could come up with SMH. WHy are they doing all this to 'blend in' if they DON"T BLEND IN? lol. Completely idiotic.

Secondly... The Volturi are gone, what are the rules?

Im sorry but im with ROSE. I really wished Nessie gave up on this imprint thing as an option for true eternal love. I mean even in the books SMeyers wrote imprinting could mean many various things. That the imprint could, friendship, guardianship, and in certain cases love. But everyone seems to just go with the 'love' option.

Honestly... I hope that she had found someone else. Don't see why SMeyers Made Bella's HEA, force JB into all of their lives. Because Clearly having the wolves on their side, was a one time bonus, and it shouldn't require her to use her daughters as a down payment to keep the tribe on her side. They should've done it out of 'mutual' self-interest. Just like anyone else. SMeyers Botched it on this hybrid imprint B.S. and I for the life of me, don't see why people keep the idiocy of it going.

Nessie is the Jar Jar Binks of the Twilight world. A character that just makes mistake after mistake, just lucking out enough to stay 1 inch above the grave.

Cullens are more human which equals more good. More Angelic than Demonic? WHAT.. hasn't she figured out that humans arent' all good by now? I mean doesn't she want to 'dispatch' a bunch of those gun dealers she found in France? A person can be good, yes, but an entire race of people who practically ignore one another, shouldn't be considered 'Angelic' just because they 'mostly' choose to walk by one another, instead of killing one another for the food and clothes they have on their back. And the only reason that is, is because 'civilization' deems it so. Take away Civilization, and the unspoken agreement we all made to be Cordial to one another, and a good majority of that ANGELIC goodness we are suppose to have goes away real quick.

False Equivalancey in this story is TOO DAMN HIGH. lololol

I dont get it... why is Ren head so messed up? she can't make a good decision if her life depended on it. Why was she trying to run to Scotland and not a phone? Alice did meet up with her in the bookstore and give her everyone's number. she left her to figure things out and this is what she does? Damn she is dumb. No wits at all.

I'm shocked Renesme as a half vampire is so weak. Or that you made her so weak. Human form Jake was enough to subdue her with no problems. no challenge at all.

Also... is mental illness hereditary? good grief. Her head is all kinds of messed up.

soooo basically all if NESSIE'S problems are in her head. Assumption of being unloved by her family when she discovered she loves the smell of human blood. And because of that and the JB rejection because she looked like a 14 yr old... she fot. it in her head she is not loved and will be unwanted of her shame comes to light. So instead of "discussing" it with anyone, she Runs away! smh.

She is Edward and Bellas daughter alright.

WOW this story is amazing. It's so beautifully written, a true bildungsroman, with the added benefit of some Renesmee and Jacob action :D.

I'm actually studying French, just got a scholarship to study abroad in Rennes (!:DDDD), so I absolutely loved the French references throughout. It was interesting to hear more about problems with misogyny and poverty in La Zone. I watched Le Brio at a local foreign film theatre - totally recommend it if you haven't seen it - which dealt with similar themes, very powerful and very sad. Also, so loved that poem in the beginning, I'm going to write it down and put it up somewhere.

You turned Renesmee into such a strong character! Thank you for writing!

This was such a beautiful read! Nessie was so relatable and realistically written. I have never read such a well written Nessie. I wish there was more. Maybe a future take or something...
Anyway, thank you for sharing this with us. I thoroughly enjoyed it!

I can't even begin to tell you how much I love this story. I've read it twice now, and I'm quite sure I'll return to read it a third time. Personally, I'm not a huge fan of Renesmee, but your portrayal of her is absolutely perfect, for the simple reason that she is imperfect. The Renesmee you wrote is an extremely believable, loveable and relatable character. The events that made Renesmee leave home were well written, and her reaction to finding out about the imprint and about Jacobs crush on Bella was - in my humble opinion - exactly what it should be. Especially the part where you write: "when it mattered, when he had a choice, he chose someone else". It really sums up one of the most problematic aspects of imprinting and shows how it isn't, can't be, a simple romance.
I'm still sad about Fatima and Abdul though, such wonderful, helpful people and the fact that they died broke my heart. But I guess it's an incredible feat of writing on your part, to make me like two OC's so much.
To sum up: your story is extremely well written, has lots of interesting character development and the plot just works from the very first sentence till the very last. Thank you for writing such an amazing story!

Great story. Loved almost every word. I got so mad at some of her decisions, but I had to know what happened, so I kept coming back.

Thank you for this wonderful story. Best wishes

I read this story for the first time a really long time ago, and I was so happy to see that it was completed! Beautiful writing and a satisfying ending! Even though I really miss Fatima and Abdul :(

This whole story was beautifully made. Thank you for sharing your talent!

Such lovely plot twists!