Reviews for New Leaf to Turn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this was absolutely fantastic! i loved it! i have such a weak spot for harry and dudley coming together when theyre older, and i think this is one of the best ive read |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just came across this today and it was awesome! I love the ending tidbit about Mari and the blue hair. This is awesome! |
![]() ![]() And then...THEN you just HAD to go and foist the most stupidest wizard of them all off on poor Hermione. If you don't like HP, why are you writing it? Obviously you don't like Harry or Hermione...or their kids with those truly horrendous names... |
![]() ![]() It comes off like Al is mocking Will, laughing at him for no good reason. That's not good. Of course, with a name like ALBUS... |
![]() ![]() Did anyone test Mari to see if she could fly, too? |
![]() ![]() OH, GAG - you just HAD to foist GinGinTheRabidFangurl off on poor Harry, didn't you... And this story was going so well... :( AND YOU STUCK THE POOR KID WITH THE ABUSIVE MANIPULATOR'S NAME TOO? Why do you hate Harry and his progeny so much? |
![]() ![]() I like how Petunia seems to be a lot less anti-magic even though Vern is still an asshole. I like how Dudley has mellowed about it all, still freaked out a little naturally but overall doing ok. |
![]() ![]() Love a good story where Dudley got his shit straightened out and has an actual GOOD life. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the Dudley-has-a-magic-child trope and this was a well executed rendition of it. I thought the interaction between Harry and Dudley was especially well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS IS JUST SO CUTE, What a fun story! and so eye opening to Dudley’s character. I have a theory that Dudley doesn’t want to be his parents but those are the only one who told him that it’s the right thing to do. Is hurt those who have ‘magic’ inside them |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the parallels between this and the beginning of Sorcerer’s Stone, plus the differences that separate Dudley from his parents. Super excited to keep reading! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would love to see what you write next. Your great writer and your stories are great too. Keep up your great works of art. I also hope you come back and write more soon. Thank you and Please, Terri |
![]() ![]() This is soo soo good. Very exciting |
![]() ![]() ![]() A fun story. Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great little ending to a wonderful fic! You did a great job of writing this. Thanks for sharing |