|Reviews for What started as an elevator ride|
| Rose Carter chapter 1 . 7/20/2014
It's really good and riveting! Just one little thing, it's not really Naruto's personality, the way u described them! But great job after all!
| draco122 chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
that was great
| Duplex8 chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Hahahahahahahaha! Haha Hiraiya oh my god! The super pervert! Haha! Good one!
| Ryu Uchiha chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
| wow chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
| Narutosyoungerbro chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
This is great story! You should write a sequel or somthing
| Le Diosa chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
The last part has me rolling on the floor in laughter. Damn Jiraiya and his peeping prowess! LOL!
| PJ Fan111 chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
awesome story its really good
| Narutofan08 chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
This was a good story. A few mistakes were here and there, but it was still enjoyable(: I liked the lemon. It was written beautifully.
| Iloveyaoi2much chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
WOW. I'm actually a yaoi kind of person but this story is very HOT!
| Suki65656 chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
ME: JIRAIYA! SHAME ON YOU! TSK TSK!
KAIA: WAIT TILL I TELL NARUTO-KUN AND INO-CHAN!
NARUTO: (growls) You don't haveta tell meh nuthin', Kaia-san.
INO: KICK HIZ ARSE, NARUTO-CHAN!
JIRAIYA: OH SH-! (coudln't finsh-he got 100 years of death-ed)
| Kaiba1288 chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
This is an awesome story you are a very good writer,
Good luck with this & any others you may write.
Looking forward to reading the rest of the story.
Peace & Jah Bless
| Mike the Remnant Paladin chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
haha! they got caught! but it was a romantic fanfic. i like this. awesome work man.
| Jker209 chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
Pretty nice, I see few spelling errors and the plot is nice for a oneshot."
| ultimateyaoifan13 chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
I Really enjoyed that story! the beginning was great! I love how ino was better than sakura thats how i always pictured it! The rest of it was great too and i love the ending wen jiriya (spelling?) is going to write a book about him