Reviews for Breathless
bjq chapter 2 . 1/24
bjq chapter 29 . 10/24/2016
awesome please update soon
bjq chapter 1 . 2/8/2016
specatacular please update soon
bjq chapter 30 . 10/27/2015
Guest chapter 30 . 1/20/2013
Enjoyed this one so far. Are you going to finish it?
AgentEppes.6 chapter 30 . 9/13/2012
I have to ask why you haven't updated this story? It is to good to be sitting unfinished. I hope you take it under consideration and get back to writing this saga. I like Tony with another gal, Ziva is such a great friend but Tony really needs someone who doesn't knock him for everything and I think you wrote a character (Riley) who does just that.
AgentD.6 chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
Great story!
BnBfanatic chapter 30 . 10/30/2011
I like this story but seems like instead of being Tony sentric or mainly about looking for the serial killer - it's all about this Riley character. That's fine of course but jsut wld prefer to have less RIley and more Tony/team/killer/danger :-)

Update soon.
DS2010 chapter 30 . 10/30/2011
I love that Tony is marrying Riley. They make a wonderful pair. I can see Ziva being sad, but I am so happy for T and R.
pinkcatsfromouterspace chapter 30 . 10/30/2011
Great story! Update soon please! Is Ziva truly happy? I doubt so. Riley needs to go! I would love to see if Ziva attends the wedding( I hope not) and how she takes the news. Does she go out and start drinking and going haywire and start doing crazy things or does she cry secretly at home everyday. Just my humble opinion though, I like her going haywire, that would be interesting to read. Kudos! (-:
Beej8 chapter 30 . 10/30/2011
Oh dear I hope Ziva doesnt ruin it for them! Please update soon
Jazz248 chapter 29 . 10/6/2011
ooh so is she the serial killer? Well obviously you're not going to say :P I just found this story and I like it; do you still update it?
AJ3kyll chapter 3 . 9/28/2011
so, is riley older than tony since she taught the classes?
DS2010 chapter 29 . 9/21/2011
Wondering what is wrong with Riley. Was surprised that Aaron didn't punch out Sacks, now that would have been something. I really like the relationship building between tony and riley.
Star1X chapter 7 . 9/14/2011
Riley is a mary-sue.
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