Reviews for Pancakes
moko-chan55 chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
this story is awesome!
Little Miss Hitaachin chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
[ didn't feel like logging in xD]

hmmm a few words? Amazing, lemony goodness, funny, and I loved the end xDDD
DarkFlameInfernal chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Love it
Jezzi1996 chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
I actually AM craving pancakes now. Which sucks, because I never have pancakes (I'm one of those horrible monsters who doesn't really care for pancakes). :( oh well, at least I read your awesome story. That definitely makes up for the whole pancake thing. :)
NeverStopBelieving chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
great! it was awesome! XD
alejandra chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
haha awesome...poor ami though.
hironohime chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
Amazing!, this story is very well written (o). I can't believe it's your first fanfic. You're professional!(_-).
undeniably.amazing chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
I was just thinking about this: it's pretty unrealistic. I guess Amu's going to have awful morning-breath for not brushing her teeth at night and terrible, crusty make-up (let's all hope she's not wearing mascara). Plus there was no after-sex pee for either of them. Whoops. I just wanted to say that here because I'm too lazy to edit it into the author's note. 'Kay. Bye now.
NightMinsk chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
Nice...and i think that adding Ami in the end wasn't such a bad idea _
Mazz chapter 1 . 7/28/2010

It a great story and realy well writen.

Ah poor Ami, That girls not gonna look at her sister the same way again.

Oh and you were worng... Ok so its only 2am but still i could go for some pancakes!


RomanticaKH1 chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
i liked it, very good job! and p.s. luv the part at the end, "hi ikuto. pancakes?" ROFL I don't know why, but I was laugh'n so hard
Ro chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
I love it . I'd like to read more tho
Serena Scarlet chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
That was pretty good.
cheleyluna chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
that scene about ami was a cute finish
Oceanmelodia chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
Nice. Very descriptive. ;)
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