Reviews for Half asleep
Guest chapter 12 . 8/13
Seriously? Naomi loses the love of her life and 3 days later she's moved on? Not buying that for 1 second!
Guest chapter 12 . 6/17
3 days and Naomi's with someone else already. Don't think so. Pretty flimsy storyline.
FufuTheFallenAngel chapter 17 . 9/22/2015
Hey i don't know if u will continue this but i would love if do because i love this story so much.
Itsjustafangirl chapter 17 . 7/6/2015
Well, it's 2015 and I just stumbled across your story, which I LOVE, and I'm guessing there isn't much hope for an update, but I'm hoping I'm wrong. I really want to see this one finished. Definitely not ready for it to be over and I definitely need some closure. Even if you don't update again, I just wanted to say how happy this story made me. Thank you (:
Lord Asmodeus chapter 3 . 6/15/2014
I quit...

Like bloody hell lad or lass...

America? Why the fuck would you go to the fucking dump that is land of the Yanks!?
Lord Asmodeus chapter 2 . 6/15/2014
Mhm...

My first impressions of dear little Emiliy is as positive as a drunken Irishmen wearing a kilt on the hottest day of the summer chugging down a barrel of lager at a astonishing pace...

Y'know just for the record...

That is not a very good thing.
mardycure chapter 17 . 10/4/2013
amaria que de la nada regresaras y terminaras la historia, por dios, yo quiero ser dra y describiste perfectamente lo que fue mi antigua relacion, debo confesar que cuando emily le dijo a naomi ''buenas noches princesa, te amo'' me mato. pero diooos, terminala, terminala,terminala pooooooor favor, ya han sido casi 3 aƱos de espera. te lo suplico
vampirebeast01 chapter 17 . 6/7/2013
WHAT?! I can't believe you've left the story in a cliffhanger for so long! I ran into this story because another fic mentioned this one and this is pretty good.
Please think about updating!
Gerald the Puppet chapter 17 . 4/22/2013
Naomily do rule. :) "Don't bring back the ghost conversation" cracked me up.

I love how much they're in love, and it's very sweet that they're now admitting to each other how they feel and how much they feel.

So, this chapter brings more mystery (Brittany, Naomi waiting outside while Emily pays?), and no updates in 2.5 years. It's probably too much to hope that you'll be back, but I'm grateful that you wrote - and I got to read - as much as you did!
Gerald the Puppet chapter 15 . 4/22/2013
Whew! That was... that was... *fans self*

Anyway, loved the Voldemort reference before and the Hogwarts (marry me!) convo this time. And agreed about vampires. Nice to see the four ladies hanging out. Not sure if it's intentional, but I love the little hints of Keffy.
Gerald the Puppet chapter 13 . 4/22/2013
Re: Chapter 14

Oh, and you already know this, but Emily's treasure hunt / plan for making up was so sweet! Very fluffy, very adorable. (I have to assume that was curry she was cooking?)
Gerald the Puppet chapter 14 . 4/22/2013
Yay! So glad to see these two back together.

I found myself cursing them for the last chapter or two, yelling (mentally) "Just tell her!" and "Just listen to her!". But I'm empathizing and identifying with them, rather than shaking my head at the unbelievableness (it's NOT, it's frustrating but it's REAL)

I loved the ukelele shoutout, even before we saw JJ... and I loved even more how he knew Naomi's last name. (Is calling your lover by her last name a British thing?)

Oh, Naomi's boss calls her "putain"? And she lets him get away with it?
Gerald the Puppet chapter 7 . 4/21/2013
Interesting to see the role reversal, with "talking with Naomi made me feel like a better person" here and an earlier reference to Naomi being the shy but brave one. However, in this post-college world, it works - I like it.

Nice re-use of the egg line... and Emily's reaction. :)
Gerald the Puppet chapter 6 . 4/21/2013
"I think I just fell a tad deeper." Ooh, nice line. It's like she's afraid to admit (or can't identify) what she's feeling, even to herself.

The kitchen banter - "fun vegetables, "spicy" - was really fun, too.
Gerald the Puppet chapter 4 . 4/21/2013
Still loving Naomi's inner monologue ("bitching Mother nature", "date with a melted Naomi"). Oh, and "why you keep calling me Emily" was hilarious.

I find Emily's plan disturbing, but am reassured by the effect Naomi seems to be having on her. Here's hoping Naomi does NOT get her heart broken...
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