Reviews for Peace to Come
MayaKumashiro chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
OMg! sooO Sweet!..thank U
WWT chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
Awww! I love this! Too bad there aren't many Shitsurakuen stories...
Ordile chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
Even though it was short, I liked it. :D
Aiden Allard chapter 1 . 9/26/2010

its was a nice read :D
Penumbrelle chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
Very nice read. We'll see how the manga goes, but I think this scene would fit right in.

Some grammar and phrasing issues break the flow (especially the first few sentences of paragraph 3), but it's not so bad that you can't understand it.

I would say fill it out a little more, but all the romance in Shitsurakuen so far has been quick, subtle hints (save the finger suckling scene perhaps) so the terseness is actually appropriate.
Kit Of Despair chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
aw this was cute and totally sweet, even tho it wasn't that long. i think some of the best writers are the ones that can have something sweet like that in fewer words that a book. :3 keep it up. this manga needs more love
Darth Luffy chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
written like it could be the missing scene from the end of the last chapter, or the start of the next chapter

you know in the manga reiko and koharu are almost definately lesbians, yuki could go either way but she seems to like sora alot, and tomoko seems to be more hero worship than anything though she might have a small crush on sora... the question is does Sora realize the feelings the other girls have? and that she herself is a lesbian? you should do a story where Sora tries to figure out what she herself is feeling