|Reviews for Telos|
| Morte Cacciatore chapter 11 . 4/27/2011
YES! an update! it's been so long!
as always great story!
but where is sasuke! I hope you put him in this story and that his a good guy again!
still love sasusaku paring...
| yeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaa chapter 11 . 4/27/2011
awesome this story is awesome do i hope soon that naruto will regain his memories and come to the rescue it should be herioc wit all the kids watching and he should use sage mode jutsu but ... rasen shuriken might be to strong but what eva i dont think this will have a sequel so use it if u wish
| Yuu-chi chapter 11 . 4/27/2011
Very awesome to see a new chapter from you, and a great chapter it was too! ;D
All the stuff about Naruto finally coming to light with the kids was fun to read, and I'll bet the scene where Naruto comes back into the story and kicks some bad guy ass will be even fun-er to read!
Looking ever and eagerly foward to your next chapter,
| zephyr hb chapter 11 . 4/27/2011
Ok, just, where is Nat?
| DemonKittyAngel chapter 11 . 4/27/2011
lol we'll let you get away with that little bit of ego. The fight worked. I'd like to see Naruto again. *tear* He's so great but he's been outta it for forever! And he's gotta kick ass and remember himself soon, ok? And the whole school will be all 'Holy shit!' and naruto can go all 'Believe it!' and the other ninjas and him can have an epic fight!
| Chilassa chapter 11 . 4/27/2011
Yay you're right! The Potter-Weasley kids can really kick some ass and I really loved this chapter- like I love every chapter of this story- but I'm starting to miss my cute Naruto again...I want him to show his super amazing shinobi-stuff off OR maybe I just want to watch the fourth Naruto Shippuden movie but it isn't fully subbed yet-imagine lots of crying-...I really need to learn japanese...that has nothing to do with this chapter though. sorry I just need someone to talk...everyone is sleeping and i wait for subs...
Thanks for writing and don't forget Chili loves you!
| Lunatic Pandora1 chapter 11 . 4/27/2011
Ahh, I love how utterly and obviously corrupt the magical government is in the HP universe.
| Little Kunai chapter 11 . 4/27/2011
they did kick ass! i'm so proud
| owlgirl16 chapter 11 . 4/27/2011
Aw, can't wait for the next chapter! Poor Malfoy!
| Frostius chapter 11 . 4/27/2011
| Spectre.of.Apples chapter 10 . 4/24/2011
Fantastic! I almost broke down crying when I realized there wasn't another chapter...LOL. :D
| CrimsonDenizen chapter 10 . 4/22/2011
This is brilliant! Though my brain did kind of implode when i got to the end of the 10th chap. and if you dont post within four days of this request . . . *holds katana to your throat* I suggest you run like the grim reaper is behind you ready to shove his sythe so far up your $s that it comes out of your mouth . . . *insert insane grin here*
| The Last Rising Of The Phoenix chapter 10 . 4/22/2011
awesome! I kinda expected Minami to be a kitsune. And who are the people in hogwarts? Icant remember any character having a wolf summoning? Update soon. Oh and is Naruto going to be paired with Minami? That would be awesome!
| Viridian chapter 10 . 4/17/2011
Ah, wow. I kind of wish I didn't stumble on this story so early - I'm not sure I can wait patiently enough for each new chapter! Plus, each one brings new unexpected developments that give us even more reason to want the next chapter!
Anyway, how did the enemy shinobi make their way to England and Hogwarts so quickly? How did they know where he went? And if they're the enemy, they are either Akatsuki, Tobi clones or Edo Tensei summons - so most likely, very, very tough opponents?
Happy writing, and I really, really hope to read more soon!
P.S. I really hope Konohamaru doesn't come along...
| Viridian chapter 7 . 4/16/2011
Ah, wow ... so much more action than expected! I'm glad to see a few recognizable Naruto characters at last!