|Reviews for Telos|
| fokker333 chapter 17 . 2/17/2013
Holy SHIT this is amazing. The universes are crafted together almost seamlessly; I can't even begin to imagine how much time it took for you to create this crossover universe. If all your chapters are this good, I have no problem waiting a few months for a new update. As a writer myself, I understand how life gets in the way sometimes. That being said, though... I think it's about time for an update, no? Keep up the good work!
| Blank chapter 17 . 2/14/2013
| JL chapter 17 . 2/9/2013
i LOVE this story plz update soon
| xxForeverLostxx chapter 17 . 2/3/2013
plz plz plz update this story its so so good, you can't just leave it here plz update
| kopycat101 chapter 17 . 1/29/2013
Things start to get serious!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
| kopycat101 chapter 16 . 1/29/2013
THAT WAS AWESOME
But...THEO WHYYYY. Theo and Jill, you messed SO much up...
At least Naruto finally woke up! Yatta!
| kopycat101 chapter 15 . 1/29/2013
Awwwwww yeeeaaah- THEY'RE MOBILIZING AND GETTING INTO ACTION.
| kopycat101 chapter 14 . 1/28/2013
Woah...That whole thing with Veralong was well thought-out, and I love the twist with him! It seems to make sense, though...Not everyone has Dumbledore's prowess with predicting things...
LetI can't wait to see what happens next!
| kopycat101 chapter 13 . 1/28/2013
Naruto finally remembers! Yahoo!
| kopycat101 chapter 12 . 1/27/2013
That transition chapter was still good! Like, woah, that was kickass!
| kopycat101 chapter 11 . 1/27/2013
At least they're FINALLY gonna move! The Japanese Ministry...Are a bunch of idiots, haha. I bet they're pretty competent other times, but just not now :B
And the kids fight back! Fuck yeah!
Hugo and Lily were AWEEEESOME. And you really MUST use the element of surprise! I mean, it worked in the ninja's favor, so why not the wizard's?
| kopycat101 chapter 10 . 1/27/2013
Oh no- The Headmaster's dead, and Hogwarts is under seige! -I MUST KNOW, THOUGH- IS NEVILLE ALIIIIIVE?! ;A;
And where IS Naruto?! Is the pace of his memories enough for him to protect Hogwarts?
And what about Manami? I knew she was a kitsune, the signs were all blatantly there, but...What'll happen to her? oAo
...I'm still wondering...How the HELL did those enemy ninja get to Hogwarts so fast? The fuck?
| kopycat101 chapter 9 . 1/27/2013
That was...slightly anti-climatic, but not?
It was a good enough chapter, I think.
But...THE NINJAS ARE THERE AT HOGWARTS! DUN DUN DUUUUN!
-Wait, how'd they find him so fast?
| kopycat101 chapter 8 . 1/27/2013
Oh no- THEY CROSSED INTO OUR WORLD! DUN DUN DUUUUN!
And...haha, I had a feeling that the potion Naruto drank was just a placebo...The Placebo Effect is a powerful thing, after all.
| kopycat101 chapter 7 . 1/27/2013
THAT WAS EPIC. HOLY SHIT.
So, where they Sound-nin? Or...
Anyways, THAT WAS SO COOL. I'm glad that Temari and Kiba came and saved Harry and the others, though! It seemed almost helpless there...