Reviews for The Lure
jmolly chapter 4 . 6/11/2010
I fear I got a bit giggly at the thought of poor Edward hanging around eavesdropping on Sacha's thoughts. And telling Angelo to turn him. Edward's changed a lot:D

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Rolex chapter 5 . 6/6/2010
Great job. It's good that he killed those evil guys. Hope to read more soon. Peace and Love :)
Rolex chapter 4 . 6/6/2010
Very great indeed. I love this story. You are doing a great job. Peace and Love :)
Rolex chapter 3 . 6/6/2010
Another great chapter. Peace and Love :)
Rolex chapter 2 . 6/6/2010
Great chapter! You did a great job. Peace and Love :)
Rolex chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
Seems like a great story so i'll read on. Peace and Love :)
jmolly chapter 3 . 5/26/2010
I wonder how Sasha is doing. Not well, I expect.

Love the information about Venice.
miaokuancha chapter 3 . 5/24/2010
I love the details that you include about the streets of Venice. They are very simple and very off-hand, yet they make the story live. Angelo is such a romantic.
miaokuancha chapter 2 . 5/24/2010
I really feel for this Angelo. And the picture you had linked for his image on Twilighted ... swoon.
jmolly chapter 2 . 5/21/2010
Very, very interesting idea my dear. I can't wait to see where you take it.

Yes, I think Edward would take him in, but I think he would also make some rules clear: no seducing established couples (ie-interfering with mate bonds) and the necessity of conforming to the diet.
miaokuancha chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
I think I read this on Twilighted ... but I am eager to read it again. You write your characters so tenderly. What a treat!
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