|Reviews for Want To Be Your Slave|
| CaitiAthena chapter 28 . 9h
I was wondering when she'd come into play
| CaitiAthena chapter 23 . 10h
ohhhh Jaken you pissed him off,he gonna kill you
| CaitiAthena chapter 21 . 10h
ohhhh sorry, no can do Jaken
| CaitiAthena chapter 19 . 14h
| CaitiAthena chapter 5 . 7/25
| LittleToxic chapter 5 . 7/14
So I am in the 5th chapter and completely hooked! Good job! Super hot! And very orginal! Right on too the next one.
| Danny Phantom's Lover chapter 23 . 4/2
You can only push someone so far until they snap...
| lyar-von chapter 19 . 3/4
| UNI chapter 11 . 1/20
Makes me wonder how Inuyasha is going to change when he reaches puberty
| Guest chapter 36 . 12/31/2015
at first.. I thought... it would be nice? I wanted to see development in their characters... i get your point about staying true to themselves... but... I think that a good story should have development... i might be a hypocrite since i got bored reading this... so i kinda skipped the lemons and lots of stuff because i hated the development... i think that it was rather cruel... It's not love anymore... I didn't like Sesshomaru... If anything Kouga actually acted better even miroku Or Riai? I dont know but... Sesshomaru was being an atypical bastard of a master... Inuyasha was deprived of even a semblance of love and care... so he hangs on to the little semblance of love he recieves from Sesshomaru even though it's wrong... I saw that Kouga understands that ut is powerless to do anything...
I just find the fact that no development happened sad... I though that since there were a lot of reviews that this wont disappoint me... but anyways... 'sides that you're a pretty decent writer... though lay off on the excessive lemons... I read them but I'm not exactly a fan... I'm a sucker for plot or character development :)
| J chapter 35 . 8/25/2015
Your story was amazing until it got to Inuyashas demon side and the way he was being treated at the end. I know you said this story wasn't about love and that a person should be capable of being accepted to treated in a way that is only possible for them ...
This story had great potential if you tweaked it a bit for some actual feelings and love an affection
However it is your story and you were trying to make a point and convey your own directional thoughts
Poor Inuyasha. Seshh claims how cruel people treat inu but in turn, sessh is the very hypocrite himself when he does to inu what he doesn't want other people to do. Condemn others of how inuyasha shouldn't be treated but goes against his words and does the same thing
There's a limit to how much heartbreak to take when inuyasha will never get that love or equality. It's painful and horrible to know that in your sequel, inuyasha is still being treated like ... SIGHHHHH.
| person2238 chapter 35 . 8/22/2015
| person2238 chapter 30 . 8/21/2015
| person2238 chapter 29 . 8/21/2015
This is starting to get boring:(
| Guest chapter 28 . 8/20/2015