Reviews for The Hurting at the End
NWHS chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
Finally got around to reading this today. This was definitely a different and unique take on Sheridan's last days with his wife. You have a very interesting style of writing. The way you formulated this story is very similar to the way you wrote the Shan'Fal story. You write in short, bit-sized pieces, moving quickly without a breath in between. Nicely done, especially the secrets they harbored for far too long.
Danielle chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
Moving and beautiful. Well done and thank you.
tbc-1955 chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
Thank you for such a well crafted story. It was to the point, excellent images that pulled this reader in to the poignant last few nights of this sweet love story. This is one of the better B5 fanfic pieces that I have read in a long while. More! More!
Laudine chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
Oh...very pretty, and so, so sad! You did a good job at this. I could really connect with both John and Delenn and their feelings during this time.
Nyt Yanse chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
This was a heart breaking story- I can understand why someone would want to push away those they love from the pain while still clinging to them. This was a great story.