Reviews for The Dead Zone
Reilly Alik Parker chapter 1 . 10/23/2011

Pallakis chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
So, okay, this story... was good. My country got to play too! And he proved to be quite good. Heh. Guess which it is?

So, the only thing that nugs me a bit - really, only a teeny tiny bit - is...

Es tevi ienīstu. Man riebās Dzīvot tavā mājā. Arī saulespuķes es ienīstu. (Latvian) I hate you. I hated living in your house. And I hate sunflowers.

Everything's alrite with this! Only that in latvian language, the uppercase letters are put only with person names, country names, etc. and the sentence start. Since 'dzīvot' means 'living', it is neither a person name, nor a country name, it should be lowercase.

I know I shouldn't be bothered by that. But, believe me, it was heartwarming to hear my native tongue around. OK, maybe not exactly hear...

Your story was really good. It was really interesting, everything was in character. LOVE IT!
LionshadeSC chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
ok this was awesome. awesome pawsome X) the way Germany was taken out was sad yet very entertaining. i liked this a lot!
sweetness4theheart chapter 1 . 9/23/2011

Thanks for making Canada awesome, for having Italy backstab Germany, for having poor Sweden in despair, for putting Australia in and...

I hate Sunflowers.

Onnoff chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
*GASP* OMG! I FOUND YOU! 3 YEARS OF SEARCHING FOR THE END OF THE PAINTBALL FIC! Oh my gosh, I can't believe i finally got to read the end. Love this story to the very end!
Guard-y nut chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
I love this! The idea is really well done, and it really shows and great use of character!
Bakage chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
fuck yeah. bad-ass Canada ftw!
Cynical Gummy Bear chapter 1 . 6/27/2011

Come on, Romano has the freaking Mafia! And I did an entire project on corrupt Italian politics in the 1500's. People back then had private armies and all of that. Of course the Italians would be a little bad ass..

Canada pwns all. And Australian accents are sexy XD

noidontwantto chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
Lol. That made me laugh so hard XDD
charlottetheharlot11 chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
Do you have an idea how long it took to put together a matching outfit? How hard it was to actually make it look good? You bastard! I'm going to make your capital Warsaw!"

that had me laughing out loud

this was hilarious. I think I'm going to re-read it over and over
Silver Wings of Eternal Light chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
OH. EM. GEE. That was amazing and beautiful and awesome and pulchritudinous and extravagant and cool and grammatically correct and great AND EVERYTHING BUT THE KITCHEN SINK!1111! (to put it short, I LOVED IT!1)
Faded-Shadow chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
lol this was hilarious!

Awesome story C:
SwordMasterZ chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
Ya I'm in agreament with the fact that sealand should not have Been playing love how canida's big concern was that America was going to be mad.
WendyLeaf chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
Hahaha! This was way too amazing.
The-Lime-Raven chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
The Italians getting Prussia out? What is this bullshittery? And why is is it easy for me to imagine?

Romano does seem the type to use his brother as a way to get Germany out XD.

Piece of maple cake. Great now I'm hungry...

Awww Japan's being the honourable little Asian he is.

Bad ass Finland Canada WIN.

Hungary vs. Belarus. Hell yeah.

'Yeah, housemates.' Pffft...

Finland going into mother hen mode. Great metaphor.


Poland threatening to make Canada's capital Warsaw lol


Iggy-kins. Why hello thar new nick-name for England.

So... Did Australia win? Or did no one? Or did Sealand?

Glad to know I'm not the only person that loves sticking foreign language into stories! Thanks for giving me new swears to yell at people.
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