Reviews for Stains
Ms.MaraJade chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
I don't normally read poetry, but this was very well done!

There is so much imagery in these 75 words, and you've captured the description of war and the chaos of trauma exquisitely. (My husband was an EMT for 12 years, and he has described to me what's it's like to be knee-deep in the insanity of trauma.)

There's just so much motion your words, how each line goes deeper into the horror with no seeming way to ease the suffering.

Again, so very well done!

Take care.
SpaghettiEater chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
Beautifully written, bravo! :)

~Sheila
Ruby-Red Revenge chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
Nice. :D

1st review!