Reviews for Sun and Moon, Fire and Water
Pirate Ninjas of the Abyss chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
Very good poem.
Ms.HellFire-ffacnt chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
It's very beautiful. The only thing I will say is that I know what you are taking about, Yin and Yang are in reference to the fish in the pond portraying the moon and sun spirits. But if you were to introduce this poem on it's own (and it can stand on it's own), people (whom are not familiar with Avatar) will have trouble understanding the line "Yin and Yang swirl to create peace", because in reality, Yin and Yang is the battle between the sexes; black is female, white is male. Otherwise, very beautifully written. You can really feel the fight for power over two very important elements.

I enjoyed it.

Terra Young chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
Great job!