Reviews for Yo Yo Girl and 2:3
pigwiz chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
I've never seen a yo yo that didn't come with strings attached.
aussiemma chapter 2 . 9/22/2010
I'm running out of things to say for just how amazing your writing is!

By far my new favourite one-shot author is in fact Alex Foster.

The progression and the changes in timeline were done so well and they all connected beautifully, I could literally see it playing out in my head. Which I guess is the whole point, but you do find people who don't have the ability to do that. You are not one of those people.
Yassie1a chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
quite good story, but i found it slightly hard to understand like the story line :)
jesse's girl 95 chapter 2 . 5/22/2010
i absolutely loved this. a truly beautiful piece of writing.

my only question (probably a stupid one)-why is the chapter called "2:3"?
jesse's girl 95 chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
this was really nice. it read well as a one shot, written very beautifully. sad, but very sweet. nice job.
Lanter chapter 2 . 5/19/2010
This nicely illustrates how complicated their relationship is.
jULIA chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
You r a very good author! U should be a writer
WishFlower chapter 2 . 5/19/2010
i love this. it seems so seddie-ish. write more, your good at it!
fireflies321 chapter 2 . 5/19/2010
I loved this. Your an amazing writer! I wish I had your skill. :D