|Reviews for The Popped Red Ball|
| Blankcassiealmighty101 chapter 1 . 6/7
i can point out some faults. Ming and her teammates wouldnt just care. They obvious did since after the game they were all worried for her. I dont think her family wouldve shamed her because she lied about the prison thing. Huey was a little ooc
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
You do realize huey broke both of his wrists right just saying not trying to be a hater love the fanfic though
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
Everyone's in character, good job
| Blade of Hellfire chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
Thank you. It's much better this way. No Jazmine/Huey please!
| Blade of Hellfire chapter 2 . 9/6/2010
Quite honestly, I loved your story on the first chapter, but this chapter killed it. I'm struggling to write a lime or lemon with this pairing,and I was happy to see a good story like this. But, the Jasmine/Huey pairing? Why? Why did you make me cry? Please type another story for this pairing, don't slaughter it.
| Taijen chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
that was so like riely to say that
| KrisB.723 chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
Cool i like it but for better understanding, you should press enter before your characters start to speak.
| Sikomi chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
My first fanfic I've read while trending the Boondocks section!
And I just finish watching this episode!
Really well written, pretty cute. I like it.
| Nakamayosha chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
That was really cute. _ You should continue this. I love their banter lol
| Reign19 chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
Great concept man, I hope that you continue and expand the plot. I would love to read the finished product.
| DemonWolf Alchemist chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
This is a cool little ficlet. I'm glad to find one with Ming. And I like the comfort.
| Bambi4ever chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
aww that was sweet
| malfunctionjunction chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
My only problem is the lack of spaces. Other than that, "Awww." The Red Ball only proves that Huey Freeman has a bleeding heart-I DON'T CARE WHAT ANYONE SAYS. Lol. So far "The Red Ball" is my favorite Boondocks episode.
Moving on, it was sweet and tender at how you put Huey and Ming. I like to believe, beneath her tough exterior, that Ming is like Jazmine. Minus the innocent and naive nature. I like to believe that Huey, beneath his aloof and cold exterior, has a kind heart. :D
It was a very touching story, and I squeal at Huey bringing her flowers. I was hoping someone was going to do a story on these two. XD
| Monkey and Cookee chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
This was very cute n.n
Great job with the story x3
| SwagSammich78 chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
That was absolutely adorable The only thing wrong (well, not WRONG per say, but something I noticed) was the lack of spacing. It would help a lot to readers if you spaced out the dialogue more instead of having it lumped into paragraphs. But it didn't take away from the niceness of the story. Good read. :)