Poor Hallibel. I guess she'd better invest in some toys.

I think this is one of my favorite versions of Shiro.

I LOVE this chapter. I would love to see someone do a drawing of an image from the photo shoot. You know, someone like Blackstorm on DA. Just, so fucking hot, you know?

The song, the dance, Noitra, Shiro dancing
and playing for Renji. It's all PERFECT. I love it too. Though Shinji and Noitra is my favorite pairing, I like this one too.

'berry juice'?
Seriously?
Soooooo wrong.

so as much as I love writers creating content, I really wish that there was an option for fanfiction that only used the characters and not the rest of the original. so that I can either look for stuff like this or look specifically for the other stuff.

pretty upset/mad that i don't get to see the rest of this.
i also wanted to know what aizen wanted to say to ichigo, and why grimm was suddenly saying aizen wanted ichigo.

Good start love the song choice

I've re-read this a few times and truly hope you finish it someday, it really is a great story

I love this story. You should update it sometime.

oh man, I can't believe you left all of us hanging like that, but thank you nonetheless for twenty-some chapters of fantastic writing. I really loved the names of the bands you created, not to mention the recommended music is spot-on! I LOVE WHEN GRIMM BOTTOMS it's so freaking cute. & this was many chapters ago but "I don't speak pillow?" YES! so cute. I squealed a lil bit.

I don't even know if you're active anymore or ever plan on finishing this story, but I enjoyed it all the same. thank you for such creativity and drama and music and LOVIN!

I was in such a bad mood through the day as I reaf this chapter because it was so freaking heartbreaking T-T

the reunion was beautiful! poor grimm&ichi... you hurt them so much. I was screaming when grimm woke up alone & he thought ich left him & NOOOO! MISUNDERSTANDINGS!

you really conveyed the intense feelings in this one (and there was a shit ton). I love nnoi in this, as always (as the friend there for grimm as he eats his feelings). simply gorgeous. I can understand why you had such a difficult time writing it, but thank you for doing so!

I'd have loved to review sooner, but I simply couldn't stop reading! I love a lot of your other work, but this is my first time reading this one. I was fascinated because I've had a band au of my own brewing in my head for quite a while now! no doubt I was super excited to find a good one from an author I already liked - if that makes any sense at all.

the dialogue draws me in. I love it. it's not too cliche; it's creative and casual and witty and goddamn amazing. I LOVE the chemistry between grimm & ichi, ofc. it's perfect. makes me squirm in bubbly happiness. & it's fuckin hot! but what makes this story even better is the SIDE PAIRINGS WOOOOOOO

toshiorra (I find I like this name better cx) is a novel pairing I've never seen before, but it is strangely very... attractive? I've never really liked either of them as characters (actually, contrary to popular opinion, I pretty much hate hitsugaya lol), but this story makes me love them! I'm starting to really like the stoic schiff & kawaii toshiro.

AND THE REASON I HAD TO REVIEW IN THIS CHP: NNOISHIROOOOOOOOOOOO

god. when they announced stripper ogichi, I was so excited I squealed. THEY ARE PERFECT! I love em both! yeeeeesssssssssssss thank you so much.

I know this story is from a long time ago, not to mention the thousand reviews already posted (is that even possible? jfc), but I figured any author would still appreciate a comment. so thank you. I have been looking for an interesting fic for a while now, and I've found it, so hopefully this will keep me occupied for another day or so hahah. ily!

jou

Szayel may not own it but what about his brother? Kinda makes sense for them to stay there if that was the case.

How can you say this chapter was crap? It had me grinning through the whole thing! I'm seriously hyper from how much I enjoyed this chapter.