|Reviews for SmallvilleX: Evolution|
| Tarix chapter 7 . 4/20
Incredibly smooth fusion of Smallville and X-men story so far.
| Galeiam chapter 36 . 3/1
Thor is mostly a Muscle Head.
Loki has mystical shielding because he Has been absorbed by Rogue before.
| Galeiam chapter 33 . 3/1
Keep your British colloquialisms to yourself!
| Galeiam chapter 14 . 2/28
It's really odd how the Dialogue in this story is pretty much perfect...yet the outside descriptions are pretty dull and spotty.
Did you start out writing scriptfics? Only reason I can think of that would cause something like this.
| celtcath74 chapter 1 . 2/22
Really good start to the tale. I do feel like the way you have Clark dealing with the issues coming up in his life without immediately thrusting into the world of Evo. Deftly like the hunt for the Bigfoot part. That was definitely entertaining. This also like the way you have Clark trying to save his goodbyes to everyone before he has to go. Also like the way you introduced Xavier and the rest of the school. Looking forward to the next chapter.
| HaywireEagle chapter 76 . 2/5
I prefer Ultimate Nick Fury over any other incarnation of the "World's Top Cop." He just had that bad ass radiance that the others kind of liked. Sam Jackson and all that.
| HaywireEagle chapter 36 . 2/4
You know, coming back through this and seeing Kal hit on anyone not his mother. I am sort of surprised that it does not come back up. Especially with Mystique or Ororo. Just saying, it would have been a hell of a conversation..
| HaywireEagle chapter 7 . 2/3
Second time reading this and the x-ray vision jokes are still hilarious.
| DD chapter 43 . 1/29
How Clark just lets his opponents act before doing anything makes this story unbearable to read. This is not a turn based role game where you must wait for your turn.
| Zak saturday 1 chapter 75 . 1/20
I hate what you didto clark that only happens to himwhen the fortess is created and he left to save chloe and the second meteor shower
| Difdi chapter 69 . 1/15
You have a continuity error in chapter 69 - the word Brainiac has crept into common usage due to how popular Superman comics are. It's very unlikely that anyone would use the word in a world where Superman exists, and probably so too does the villain of the same name.
| Difdi chapter 68 . 1/15
You have a technical error and a typo in chapter 68.
The typo is in your description of the toy planes - the word you want is bi-plane or possibly bi-winged. Bi-pedal means two feet - like a human has two feet.
The technical error is where you have Kitty hacking into the Patent Office. There is absolutely no need to do so, since the Patent Office archives are publicly available.
That's one reason why some inventions aren't patented - WD-40 oil, for example, isn't patented because to get a patent you have to disclose the formula, plans or process of the invention. Patents eventually expire, allowing anyone to build the invention - WD-40, to continue with the example, would be in the public domain now if it had been patented, but by keeping the formula secret instead, the manufacturer is still the sole supplier of it and it has made them rich.
| Difdi chapter 67 . 1/15
You have a typo in chapter 67 - it's Quebecois, not Quebecian.
| Difdi chapter 63 . 1/15
Yeah, Deadpool is nuttier than squirrel crap, but ironically the thing that makes him seem the craziest to most people, the fourth wall thing, isn't him being crazy at all.
That awareness is one of my favorite things about the character, and honestly, there's a good point in there. Fifteen chapters is way too long to go without at least mentioning him...
| Difdi chapter 55 . 1/14
You have a typo almost at the end of chapter 55 - there is no 't' in the word disdain. You spelled it as 'distain'.