Reviews for SmallvilleX: Evolution Year 1
holliswalley chapter 47 . 4/25/2015
Bamf, bamf, bamf, bamf, bamf, bamf, bamf, bamf, bamf! Damn that is a funny word!
holliswalley chapter 32 . 4/25/2015
Doesn't that make all their worry before this kinda pointless?
holliswalley chapter 10 . 4/24/2015
Jonathan- Why is there a boy-shaped hole in the wall?
Clark- Ummm... The dog did it.
Tarix chapter 86 . 4/24/2015
A really great story.
Tarix chapter 7 . 4/20/2015
Incredibly smooth fusion of Smallville and X-men story so far.
Galeiam chapter 36 . 3/1/2015
Thor is mostly a Muscle Head.

Loki has mystical shielding because he Has been absorbed by Rogue before.
Galeiam chapter 33 . 3/1/2015
Keep your British colloquialisms to yourself!
Galeiam chapter 14 . 2/28/2015
It's really odd how the Dialogue in this story is pretty much perfect...yet the outside descriptions are pretty dull and spotty.

Did you start out writing scriptfics? Only reason I can think of that would cause something like this.
celtcath74 chapter 1 . 2/22/2015
Really good start to the tale. I do feel like the way you have Clark dealing with the issues coming up in his life without immediately thrusting into the world of Evo. Deftly like the hunt for the Bigfoot part. That was definitely entertaining. This also like the way you have Clark trying to save his goodbyes to everyone before he has to go. Also like the way you introduced Xavier and the rest of the school. Looking forward to the next chapter.
HaywireEagle chapter 76 . 2/5/2015
I prefer Ultimate Nick Fury over any other incarnation of the "World's Top Cop." He just had that bad ass radiance that the others kind of liked. Sam Jackson and all that.
HaywireEagle chapter 36 . 2/4/2015
You know, coming back through this and seeing Kal hit on anyone not his mother. I am sort of surprised that it does not come back up. Especially with Mystique or Ororo. Just saying, it would have been a hell of a conversation..
HaywireEagle chapter 7 . 2/3/2015
Second time reading this and the x-ray vision jokes are still hilarious.
DD chapter 43 . 1/29/2015
How Clark just lets his opponents act before doing anything makes this story unbearable to read. This is not a turn based role game where you must wait for your turn.
Zak saturday 1 chapter 75 . 1/20/2015
I hate what you didto clark that only happens to himwhen the fortess is created and he left to save chloe and the second meteor shower
Difdi chapter 69 . 1/15/2015
You have a continuity error in chapter 69 - the word Brainiac has crept into common usage due to how popular Superman comics are. It's very unlikely that anyone would use the word in a world where Superman exists, and probably so too does the villain of the same name.
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