Reviews for One Promise Kept: A Saga
Midnight Reader chapter 189 . 7/3
Okay, so I just finished this EPIC SAGA of a fanfic (after reading it for over two weeks now), and I have to say...this is by far one of the BEST fanfics I've ever had the pleasure to read. Coming from an editing perspective, it was so refreshing to read a well-written piece of work that had very few mistakes. Most fanfic writers might not fully grasp the concept of "mistakes make for marvelous distractions"... it's hard to read something with intent when there are misspellings, incorrect punctuation, formatting flubs, and improper uses of homophones. Thankfully though, you get it, and this work is now cannon and completely wipes out the second movie entirely! It's like it never happened, and that's a relief because your work is so much better than the sequel that shall not be named, remembered, or invited to tea. I can't tell you how many nights I stayed up until 3, 4, almost 5 in the morning reading this fanfic in hopes that it would keep getting better...and it did! The fifth book was harder to read, though...in all honesty. After it was kinda for sure and for certain Tarrant would die, it was heartbreaking to read the rest until THE VERY END. I had a feeling he was dying in the first "chapter," and by the second I knew that's where it was heading...it was the only way the story could go, and my heart cried. Then, it cried some more when Alice thought everything was fine because of the Oraculum...and it wasn't. On top of that, I was convinced you would have Gray Lady die in the past because everything seemed to be leading to that plot point. The Knight had said Alice would see Tarrant again, but not that he would be brought back to life, her heart line was steadily fading, Tam was (practically) old enough to take care of himself...it just made sense that Alice would join Tarrant in death. HOWEVER, I read through the entirety of book 5 holding out every hope that there would be a happy ending! You do not disappoint, bravo my dear. Very few stories bring tears, and this one brought dampness. I thoroughly appreciate your attention to detail, timelines, cultures, and characters. I more-so appreciate that you wrote it all in a fanfiction. You could be writing novels and rolling in profits with this talent (and could very well be for all I know), but you chose to write a beautiful piece around someone else's original story for the fans. THANK YOU! Thank you for sharing your talent, thank you for taking the extra time, and thank you for showing your beautiful imagination! I look forward to what else there is to come. Okay, I have nothing to read now, so I might read this again until I've recovered :D
BlackRose999 chapter 189 . 6/7
Can you please explain to me the days in Underland? I kinda understand some of it, but I'm a little lost...
XToWeirdToLiveX chapter 90 . 3/15
This must be a contender for the best fics I have ever read, I have come back to read it all again I seem to be doing that a lot lately with my personal favorites. I never thought I would get into a tarrant and Alice ship when I first read it...I was so wrong they are legit the most perfect couple both desperately loving the other. originally I thought the age gap was gonna bother me for some weird reason but it doesn't make a difference they are most definitely and utterly obsessed with each other it's beautifulwipes away tears of joyD
Guest chapter 8 . 1/31
I severely took that out of context
Guest chapter 74 . 10/25/2016
Haha I kind of ship Leif and Alice together
Guest chapter 24 . 10/20/2016
Awwww this chapter made me so happy
A Brief Escape From Reality chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
cant wait to read!
Sebine chapter 35 . 5/8/2016
They are a matched pair of nutters

And it is adorable.
VampCrazygirl chapter 189 . 8/24/2015
I just thought I should tell you, now that I've reached the end, that I truly loved your story.
Lady Zutara chapter 60 . 6/29/2015
OMGOSH! Soo Alice has finally gone around the bend.
Lady Zutara chapter 52 . 6/28/2015
You've created such an intricate world! I really just can't stop fangirling over every aspect of this story! It deserves tons more reviews.
And the heart line is just so sweet. _
Lady Zutara chapter 40 . 6/28/2015
LOL. His third hope is kind of hilarious.
Lady Zutara chapter 26 . 6/28/2015
You're so creative! All these traditions and rites of passage you've made are so out of the box and amazing.
Lady Zutara chapter 22 . 6/28/2015
:O :O
Ooooooo what's gonna happen to Alice!?
Lady Zutara chapter 17 . 6/28/2015
Awh that was definitely one of their cuter exchanges.
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