|Reviews for One Promise Kept: A Saga|
| FatalStarshine chapter 77 . 2/15
I feel awful for not reviewing more, I got so sucked into the story that I was more concerned with hitting 'next'. Dx
Hopefully when I review again it won't be on my tablet so it will be decent.
As of right now I'm loving this story! I can't wait to see what happens in book 3.
| FatalStarshine chapter 10 . 2/13
Loving this story! Can't wait to see what happens next!
| izzybizzy333 chapter 189 . 1/7
I've loved this fic for a long while now. It's one of the staples I always return to, an adventure I enjoy everytime and a marvel of writing and characterization I wonder at even time. Thank you! I have to admit though, my only dissatisfaction with it is that Alice and Hatter only had one child. I was so looking forward to Tamial being a big brother, and Tarrant spoiling a little girl, and his rage resurfacing when she starts dating... I even almost wrote it.. Until I realized I'd be writing fanfiction of fanfiction, which seemed a bit much to even me. Plus, I couldn't figure out a name. These are your characters, and I can't possibly follow in your footsteps. Thank you for this experience and I hope you do find another prompt.
| Little.Red.Box.III chapter 1 . 12/25/2014
You are a wonderful writer. I have never read a more beautifully written fanfiction. This story actually captured and consumed me rather than just being a way to entertain myself for a moment. I couldn't stop reading for a second.
| XxStarfire268xX chapter 38 . 8/20/2014
OMG this is amazing! You are an amazing writer, i'm impressed with your writing skills! i just finished book 1, it was awesome. This is one of the best fanfictions i've read in this sitw and there's still a long way till i finish the whole story, but i don't care. I love everything about this story. Congratulations! Adding this to favorites NOW.
Sorry for my bad english.
| ArabellaFaith chapter 189 . 8/18/2014
This story has utterly consumed me for the last few days. It was lovely and perfect and I can't thank you enough for writing it. I sincerely hope that someday you will give us more snippets about this wonderful universe you've created and let us see a bit more of it!
| ArabellaFaith chapter 38 . 8/16/2014
I had absolutely no intention of starting an epic saga, let alone an AiW one...but this drew me in so utterly that now I can't resist! It is absolutely lovely and I can't wait to keep reading the rest!
| Ray ray chapter 8 . 7/5/2014
I just thought you should know that I have loved this story so much. I have already read it once and I was so sad to see it end. It has only been a month or two and I'm already rereading it. I truly do love it. It is beautifully written. I'm just absolutely enam
| SweetnSour333 chapter 29 . 7/1/2014
Son of a BITCH! The slim all of a cockroach!
| SweetnSour333 chapter 26 . 7/1/2014
Oh no oh no oh no! I bet you Alice is going to be a bit more upset when she finds out the Hatter knew about it. DX
This is a fantastic story! ... Ahem just saying.
| SweetnSour333 chapter 8 . 6/30/2014
Oh boy oh boy what is the Hatter planing? Oh and just so you know my good goodly writer you have me hooked so deep it's like when Mally got hold of the Bandersnatch's eye. This story is fantastic!
| SweetnSour333 chapter 2 . 6/29/2014
That last line is gold ... just saying.
| SweetnSour333 chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
So I blindly went into this story because it was recommended by one of my favorite FanFiction writers LA Knight and I am so glad a took her word.
One chapter and I am hooked and then when I check to see how many chapters there are I have fallen in love! like I am swooning right now. XD
Ok so My favorite part about this is how easy it is for me to picture this like a movie. Your way of writing is fantastic and I love how your descriptions of how Mirana moves is spot on! She is by far my favorite character in Alice in Wonderland and it makes me so happy you are writing her so well.
Now ... ONWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!
| Sethanon chapter 189 . 5/21/2014
What a wonderful saga thank you for sharing this piece.
| Vema chapter 189 . 1/21/2014
I actually read this on your live journal, but I have found it nearly impossible to set one up for myself (as I stated in a review for "The Champion's Hatter" on AO3" as well, lol). There is so much I could say about this fanfic. At first, I was hesitant to read it because it INTIMIDATINGLY LONG, lol. But I am so very glad that I finally did.
Incredible. Your writing is simply incredible, marvellous, amazing, and overwhelming! The way the stories weave together, the brilliance of the plot, the imaginative additions. Truly a work of art if I have ever seen one. I have been reading this little by little for the last four weeks, and now that it's finished, I feel utterly satisfied with the ending.
A few things that stuck out to me as I read -
Alice and Tarrant's utter NEED for each other. The way you portray them reminds me of a "ship manifesto" by jjtower on live journal; s/he suggested that Alice was Tarrant's sanity, and Tarrant was Alice's Muchness. This was definitely played out in your story, and SO wonderfully. I'm driven to read the first book again so I might re-experience it, though I've my own fanfiction to work on!
I did not like Hamish as a character at all until I got to Book 3 of this particular story. I love the way you portrayed him, and I'm now somewhat of a Hamish/Margaret shipper, they were so perfect together! And he and Tarrant's fun and strange little friendship - I adore it.
The Jabberwocky mythology you introduced (i.e. the Vorpal sword as a stolen part of him) is now my headcannon. What a brilliant explanation, just brilliant. And I adore Chessur and Krystoval's relationship as well. As close to spouses as you can get without the more physical intimacies, and it's so sweet!
Your OC's were compelling and had their own wonderful flaws, which is a great strength in an OC! Some of my favorites were Tarra, Davon, Amallya, and Tamial. I found with ALL of the OC's in this story, I was not overwhelmed with the typical "let's-get-to-the-real-characters" urge that I usually feel.
Finally, the way it ended. The last part, with Alice and Tarrant at the Maigh, celebrating Tamial's bethrothal; you set it up in Book 3, and it was so incredibly rewarding, just the right way to end it; on a beginning, as it were!
I'll leave off on my rambling review here (R words!), but just know that your lovely piece has touched me and enhanced my enjoyment of the fandom, which is the highest praise that I can heap on an fanfiction author. You have my everlasting thanks.