Reviews for The Comming Tide
Madanoch chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Not too bad, but please try to avoid labeling as femshep when it's actually the male version. It's a bit misleading
smashbrawlguy chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
Eh... it's okay. The incident with Kasumi seems forced; she didn't become the best thief in the galaxy by being careless.
celestial-insanity chapter 2 . 8/12/2010
Katsumi Kasumi.

Generally, thoughts are in italics instead of bold. ;)

Keep up the good work, though. My offer of beta still stands. :D
celestial-insanity chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
Very nice start, but you may want to look into finding a beta reader for future chapters to get the grammar and paragraph spacing down. ;) I volunteer, if you'll have me! :D
Rougelover chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
nice chapter mate
fan boy for rongo chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
short and sweet not bad
bharned1 chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
You're doing a good job with getting the characters personalities down, they're very close to on-game. Nice touch with Kasumi, that was funny. The pacing was a little fast- you could've gone into more detail- but I like the way this is started.
BigG666 chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
Haha awsome but SHEPARD YOU PLANK

DON'T GO FOR KASUMI.. If you do I'll cut yo balls off :D
sargentaaron2004 chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
oooo, Possible Shep/Tali/Kasumi pairing? Triplet? Interesting :S
V.A chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
Nice start off and funny ending would like to see more of this story in the coming future.