Reviews for Return to the past
Himeno Kazehito chapter 2 . 11/14
I know that it's been 5 years but please update
SilentStorm1999 chapter 2 . 12/3/2011
I understand that it's been a year. But update!
Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 2 . 10/9/2011
:) I like it so far and I wish the chapters were longer, I just wanted to keep reading.
Sylene Bloodrose chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
please write more than 2 chapters!11

Please write more!1
Aelita Stones1 chapter 2 . 7/21/2010
good and keep the chapters coming it's cool
Aelita Stones1 chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
Sylene Bloodrose chapter 2 . 6/7/2010
great story. Are you going to continue? Please do.
Xxmgxx3445xX chapter 2 . 5/23/2010
Your writing style is pretty simple and not very detailed, but the plot has definitely intrigued me. Try writing longer chapters by adding more details to things, and by not rushing through the scenes so much. Also, be careful with your grammar. There are a few places where you used lowercase where it should have been uppercase and there were a couple of misspelled words as well. I would suggest reading over the chapter several times, with a decent time interval between each reading, before posting. You'll be able to catch a lot more of these mistakes that way. If possible, I'd also suggest getting a beta-reader.

Please don't think I'm flaming you with this review xD You definitely have a lot of potential here!


whatapapa chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
Nice! Very well written. And if you have time, check out my story. It's what the season 5 of code lyoko would have looked like.