Reviews for Warrior of the Omnitrix X
syndorias cinders chapter 1 . 7/16
EliteSlayer103 chapter 18 . 7/11
Hmm, unless Charmcaster appeared earlier and Dark Specter didn't appear yet.
Uber Ghidorah chapter 18 . 7/11
So what's the deal with Frightwig? In the Zombozo chapter, Ben/Naruto seemed to go easy on her and flirt with her, which made me think future harem member, but this chapter gives me some doubt. Was the previous chapter just flirting and nothing more, or what? My questions need answers!
Great so far, by the way.
bloodbrother 18 chapter 18 . 7/10
Can't wait for the next chapter
gamelover41592 chapter 18 . 7/10
great job on this chapter
Cat Eyes In The Night chapter 18 . 7/10
How long r u going to drag this on before something happens between naruto and gwen you could atleast try to be more original instead copyibg the show with slight variations
Fox Boss chapter 18 . 7/10
I'm not sure if you noticed, but the pretty much made Spectar a girl in the fight with the Circus Trio.
HaretaSora chapter 18 . 7/10
Okay so Naruto tells Charmcaster ""If you're making any plans for the Omnitrix I would dash them now. Its keyed to my DNA and let's just say trying to inhabit my body will have lethal consequences" BUT Specter is able to make him worried when he has Kurama, a massive Bijuu of crazy powers inside him that could easily push Specter out.
I'd say that is a MIGHTY BIG contradiction you have there
minato.akashi.16 chapter 18 . 7/10
Who's kai green?
bloodbrother 18 chapter 17 . 6/27
Can't wait for the next chapter
EliteSlayer103 chapter 17 . 6/19
I'm excited to see my OC's soon appearance.
Prince Sheogorath chapter 17 . 6/19
Please update soon!
Icon of Sin chapter 17 . 6/18
This is getting better and better.
GentlestCobra2 chapter 17 . 6/18
Great keep it up
R-king 93 chapter 17 . 6/18
Interest ways you dealing with Ben enemies
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