Reviews for 20 Truths: Team Guy
notmenotinotyou chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
Lol yeah those green spandex suits don't leave much to the imagination. Loved this!
xxBluexMoonxx chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
I liked it. just ignore TheRealGoodyTwoShoes. it was definitely a story, not just a list. my favorite part was

Kakashi never gets the catfight he's hoping for

MadroxMR chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
This story was cute. Seventeen was my favorite, with the related eighteen a close second. I liked the father/daughter ones as well as the hints that Tenten suffered abuse in the past. That helped deepen your list just a little bit more.

It made me smile, so well done!
MrGoodyTwoShoes chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
Entries not allowed:

1. Non-stories: lists, bloopers, polls, previews, challenges, author notes, and etc.

2. One or two liners.

3. MST: comments inserted in between the flow of a copied story.

4. Stories with non-historical and non-fictional characters: actors, musicians, and etc.

5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.

6. Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries.

Your story is not allowed under section 1 of the guidelines.

As a suggestion with how to fix it - why not write a group of short stories with each one being based upon one of the points on your list and just having this being as a guide or a table of contents.