Reviews for Adelaide: Short Stories of a Heritor
scoutmasterkb28 chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
hey DarkAres, i found your fanfic quite interesting. quite funny in the end. but there's some missing punctuation marks. on the paragraph which starts with: But instead he said he would pin the blame on me!.there should be open inverted commas on the start of it to make sure the readers know that is a speech line.

nice 1st chapter, sorry if i was too harsh(am i?) about the grammar. i used to make such mistake(and maybe still making them here).