Reviews for Harry Potter and the Heir of Magic
Guest chapter 16 . 20h
No you purposely created an excuse that only an idiot would think justifies your mistakes. That whole chapter was centred around you creating propaganda based off your very own blatant bigotry. Which actually defied before chapters. Essentially you're a bigoted hypocrite.
MandDsGirl chapter 16 . 8/15
I can't wait for your next brilliant chapter! Hope it's as well done as those before it!
stylo1 chapter 15 . 8/11
bit rough dont you think? claiming that homosexuals are against nature of magic. its subtle enough not to be insulting but clear enough to leave a rasist aftertaste
Guest chapter 15 . 8/3
we are all God's children only he can judge us so until he does people should BACK THE FUCK OFF other people and how they live their lives WE ARE NOT GOD
Guest chapter 14 . 8/3
please come back this is awesome
Guest chapter 6 . 8/3
what about the other girls ?
Guest chapter 3 . 8/3
twice I have read this please come back and finish it
Guest chapter 2 . 8/3
someone wrote they were not reading this due to a romance starting at harry and Gabby's age to that person and other of the same thought 1) she is a veela they are sex beings and/or beautiful women in most harry potter stories 2) that just met, chill out perv not one thing has happened yet 3) different people have different ideas about romance and what age they should start, I'm not saying kids should be like that but chill its A STORY NOT TRUE FOR FUN
matmac chapter 15 . 8/2
Great story and an interesting idea but i wanted to ask about a bit of contrivercy dumbledore (sorry for any misspell) said to accept the falts within us but you meantion jesus saying regect the evil so regecting the falts within us so im just confused by the mesage your sending if i got it wrong i am sorry for it
Uzushiogakure chapter 4 . 7/10
Cadmus Peverell was the middle brother Not the eldest that Antioch Peverell
Uzushiogakure chapter 3 . 7/10
So when exactly is Harry going to address the fact that Snape (a death eater) who is the primary cause of his parents death and Neville parents being tortured into insanity is fucking not in Azkaban or better yet has been executed and is a fucking teacher a fucking horrible one at that I bet the amount of potioneers in magical Britain has had a huge decrease since he became a teacher.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/10
I am going to stop reading here. Start romance plots when people are at an appropeiate agev
stacygrrl2002 chapter 4 . 7/7
Stupid question time. Dragon hide is almost impervious to magic. Would not dragon hide on the handle of the wand act as an insulator between the users magic and the foci of the wand preventing it's use?
Guest chapter 2 . 6/29
MSgt SilverDollar and Snake chapter 13 . 6/29
I think you hit the nail on the head with this chapter. The USA has been on a path to destruction since the 1950s and the rest of the so called civilized world is following it. Goose story that unfortunately appears to be abandoned. ~~Snake~~
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