|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Heir of Magic|
| ninzithegreat chapter 14 . 15h ago
please update, i am waiting desprately for the next chapter.
| Darksblade chapter 13 . 3/12
this story is great, want more
| Reedmanish chapter 14 . 3/6
great story. please update it's unique and very well written
| kanazak chapter 6 . 3/3
Wondering how the press will handle that Harry and Moony used the killing curse in public, even if it WAS (and it was) on a deserving target, and, despite being an Unforgivable, is supposedly a relatively painless (or at least quick in the cases where souls being ripped from bodies hurts, which I suppose is probable) way to die.
Also, Hermione didn't appear to be bothered by the polygyny. I kinda doubt that, with your religion and Hermione's usual upbringing, that she doesn't have monogamy hardcoded in her, so I'm guessing it's more that she got distracted by the whole Veela thing? Guess I might find out next chapter
Anyway, lots of fun reading this story.
| Zeran X chapter 4 . 3/2
I really wish you didn't drag every little thing out and just get on with story I mean come on 4 chapters in and they haven't even got to hogwarts yet for gods sake man hurry up
| TheBlackLord chapter 14 . 3/1
I for one, agree with his last A/N on chapter 14, I love America, don't get me wrong, but the government is extremely corrupt. Almost too corrupt to be honest. For example, we refuse to acknowledge countries formed by cout' de tat' as an actual nation when that is exactly what America did to break free of the UK, I refuse to call it Great Britain because I honestly don't think its great, during the late 18th century. The government is so damn hypocritical.
Great story by the way!
| Evangeline Whitlock chapter 4 . 2/28
when I read the ollivander part I could almost see him prancing with glee at harry's wand
| Blackfox668 chapter 2 . 2/25
| blackshadow111 chapter 1 . 2/23
Hooookay! ! I'll admit it. Man, you're GOOD! I think I'm in love with this story, just off of reading your last chapter. See, I found it when I was looking for another story that had a council of fifteen in it, but found this jewel instead. So I read the last chapters (that was the one Google gave me). Then I went and read your profile, and again, became fascinated.
So I'll try to give another opinion after I've read the whole thing through, although I can say I'm practically shivering with anticipation!
| b.flow chapter 8 . 2/23
Hahaha! I just thought that husband and wife normally sleep in the same bed imagine harry potter in the middle of like 14 girls ! Anyway really good so far ...
| Saif chapter 2 . 2/21
Just a comment, i don't know where you can find the commenting space. But what is with harry knowing stuff he found out when he was in his sixth and seventh year? Also what is with his new behavior? And he's a parselmouth. He can talk to snakes not goblins.
| darrian808 chapter 14 . 2/19
| Choosy chapter 14 . 2/18
I love this story and hope u will continue it someday. Thank you and hoping
| Sparkysbro201 chapter 14 . 1/15
Personally, I enjoyed your view on the 'expansion of freedom vs. normalization of immorality' last chapter. It was a view that I have not personally seen, and one that I will enjoy contemplating in the future.
| Guest chapter 14 . 1/8
extremly good story, one of the best i hav read update soon